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You Are Mine
Face down as time
rests on it's side,
washed in gray
like death,
claws tap on
leather like skin,
wanting to cut
into flesh,
wanting the pain
of me deep inside
your mind,
I warned you,
you are mine
rests on it's side,
washed in gray
like death,
claws tap on
leather like skin,
wanting to cut
into flesh,
wanting the pain
of me deep inside
your mind,
I warned you,
you are mine
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9th Sep 2013 1:59pm
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 3:29pm
that is telling it tl...strider
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 7:19pm
Tommie, I love your word usage and phrasing in this one. It evokes for me thoughts of one possessed by demons.
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