Dance of the Gallows

as if we needed any more proof, you're brilliant in your manipulation of words, madame. your imagery sends me sideways! gorgeous, ominous, heavy--with three sentences.

Thanks so much! I didn't think it would go over well considering how fast I wrote it but apparently it was a brilliant decision! :) I appreciate it, tons.

You sound so much like Wole Soyinka, a great poet from my country.

Thanks Divine, I take your love to heart. :)

that I soo love this! ...and happy new years Jade!

Thanks a gazillion!! Happy New Years to you too! Have a good one! (dont get too drunk. :P)

...that wouldn't sound like foppish praise? I love this.  

Love has been sent back to you ten fold. Glad you enjoyed it so. :D

I'll jump on it. Strong, terse, stripped-out style like a bad-arse rat-rod come thumping down main-street showing all the primpers and posers what a real poem sounds like....ripping it up Jade, ripping it up.

I am honored to have ripped it up in a way you felt was exquisitely stapled to the earthly floor. :) Thanks for liking it.

Quite an interesting piece. Touched by darkness.

and this time you have offered undoubtedly your best!!!

pretty sinister nd very short

made me shiver in delight!

Love it..


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¿Qué...How? To get it so right in so few words. You are phenomenal. Wow. Good blooming show as I'd say =] Brilliant, very clever. How many adjectives can I use? I like it, a lot.

you're an apple in my eye, or maybe i've got that wrong??

Nah, I'm one of those really tiny crab apples. You know, the cute ones. ^_^

Short but powerful, much enjoyed