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Tavern Wench
Peasants clinging pints
together slurring their
drunken songs,
while the Irish
wolfhound digs at
his fleas by the crackling
fire,
laughter from the
painted whore rings in
the ears of the
horny
lonely men,
she bounces down the
stairs to collect
the next frolic,
they lick their dirty lips
and wipe off their
wired beards onto their
filthy sleeves,
the stench of beer and
smoke invade every
corner of the
pub,
with a wisp of the
whores perfume lingering
in the nostrils of
the buyers,
each one spilling their
ale as they wait
their turn with the
tavern wench.
together slurring their
drunken songs,
while the Irish
wolfhound digs at
his fleas by the crackling
fire,
laughter from the
painted whore rings in
the ears of the
horny
lonely men,
she bounces down the
stairs to collect
the next frolic,
they lick their dirty lips
and wipe off their
wired beards onto their
filthy sleeves,
the stench of beer and
smoke invade every
corner of the
pub,
with a wisp of the
whores perfume lingering
in the nostrils of
the buyers,
each one spilling their
ale as they wait
their turn with the
tavern wench.
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5th Sep 2013 5:31am
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5th Sep 2013 12:57pm
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5th Sep 2013 5:34am
I love this piece. You've covered all of the senses with this one...a super fun write...now I thought you were a home health care worker :D
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5th Sep 2013 12:57pm
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5th Sep 2013 6:27am
Atmospheric. Poem leaves one asking - is she the barmaid or resident whore? Or both?
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5th Sep 2013 12:58pm
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5th Sep 2013 1:02pm
It must be exhausting to be the wench. I mean,so many men and just one of her? Truly an exhausting line of work.
Nice writing (:
Nice writing (:
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5th Sep 2013 1:07pm
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 4:45pm
I could hear the music, the laughter, the clinking of glasses while reading this one! Nice!
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5th Sep 2013 10:08pm
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 9:16pm
reminded me of every bar and pub I've ever been in tl...good job
strider
strider
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5th Sep 2013 10:10pm
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Every bar and pub Strider? Where the hell do you hangout at? Why do I feel like hanging out with you, hemi, case28, JohnF, tornado and HadesRising would require signing a waiver and doubling my life insurance policies?
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7th Sep 2013 2:18am
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6th Sep 2013 3:23pm
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6th Sep 2013 5:46pm
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6th Sep 2013 8:40pm
Cool sensory right ... loved the part about the dog - deft touch ...
LSP
LSP
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7th Sep 2013 2:18am