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His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
Today I read the lyrics to a broken record,
Screeching as the record was, I listened. Attentively.
In this medium room, filled with leather chairs and dusty books
The library stayed dusty either way.
Then I noticed a young man with dark hair
He'd fallen into a sweet sleep for a while now,
But woke up with a frightened face
He searched the room as though he'd seen a ...ghost
The record stopped.
His chest rose rapidly, but eventually fell dormant
I searched his face and located a tear halfway down his cheek,
But he smiled as though a promise was made to him,
A promise that could keep him holding on,
A promise made by His Beloved.
I smiled, "I'll make that broken record okay again, My Beloved."
And just like that, I vanished.
(Your Beloved roams your world still, CrypticPoet. Please hold on.)
Screeching as the record was, I listened. Attentively.
In this medium room, filled with leather chairs and dusty books
The library stayed dusty either way.
Then I noticed a young man with dark hair
He'd fallen into a sweet sleep for a while now,
But woke up with a frightened face
He searched the room as though he'd seen a ...ghost
The record stopped.
His chest rose rapidly, but eventually fell dormant
I searched his face and located a tear halfway down his cheek,
But he smiled as though a promise was made to him,
A promise that could keep him holding on,
A promise made by His Beloved.
I smiled, "I'll make that broken record okay again, My Beloved."
And just like that, I vanished.
(Your Beloved roams your world still, CrypticPoet. Please hold on.)
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Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Sep 2013 4:31pm
4th Sep 2013 4:30pm
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4th Sep 2013 4:51pm
The whole story behind spun my heart. It was heartbreaking. I also hope he'll like it. And thank you ______3331103 :) really appreciate it
Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 4:49pm
This is AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL! I loved
every word, and could NOT have said
it any better. It's very touching,
endearing to a soul that seems lost
and trying to find their way.
I so ENJOYED! Also, welcome to DUP:)
every word, and could NOT have said
it any better. It's very touching,
endearing to a soul that seems lost
and trying to find their way.
I so ENJOYED! Also, welcome to DUP:)
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re: Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
4th Sep 2013 4:57pm
To hear you say that makes it all the more worthwhile. Thank u for reading and thank u for welcoming me. <3
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4th Sep 2013 4:49pm
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re: Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
4th Sep 2013 5:00pm
Do not cry But never refrain from it. All pain is released like that. To try is all we could ever ask for. Keep trying.
You're most welcome.
You're most welcome.
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Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
4th Sep 2013 5:34pm
*sniffle sniffle* You have a beautiful way with words my friend. That was sad,but I enjoyed it. Xoxo
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re: Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
4th Sep 2013 5:45pm
'Sniffled' - great description, haha. I live for beautifying poems with word, so thank u so very much :)
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Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
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- Edited 5th Sep 2013 11:57pm
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re: Re: His Beloved. (Inspired by CrypticPoet)
6th Sep 2013 00:54am
I noticed the continuation there, and I suppose you could have this scribe be 'yours' too. :). I'm glad I could do that for you, as for touching your core, I feel an intense emotion of joy. You're most welcome Amanecio .
(P.S Keep Charm updated on your mysterious dreams. Haha.)
(P.S Keep Charm updated on your mysterious dreams. Haha.)
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