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Re: Haiku XXIV
4th Sep 2013 4:53pm
very beautiful image...I
have always wondered
at the tenacity of plants,
particularly those small
green shoots that you
see sprouting out of
dry stone walls...
have always wondered
at the tenacity of plants,
particularly those small
green shoots that you
see sprouting out of
dry stone walls...
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re: Re: Haiku XXIV
Thanks a lot, dartford! I'm always affected, too, by those brave and frugal plants which grow and live under such challenging circumstances. They absolutely deserve a haiku of their own!
You wrote 'sprouting out of'. Is 'from' correct, too?
You wrote 'sprouting out of'. Is 'from' correct, too?
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4th Sep 2013 7:08pm
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4th Sep 2013 7:33pm
Re: Haiku XXIV
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 5:09pm
This is one of my favorite ones by you...
You capture the image well with your words, Chi!
You capture the image well with your words, Chi!

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re: Re: Haiku XXIV
4th Sep 2013 5:59pm
Thank you, Liz (may I call you Liz?)! I saw them in the Alps while taking photos. I admire them a lot and so it was inevitable to try another haiku on the tiny fellows :-).
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4th Sep 2013 7:18pm
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4th Sep 2013 7:41pm
Always grateful for your great comments, J.! My namesake would probably turn over in her grave *chuckle* if she knew! If only I had known that haikus would become my "obsession" I'd have named myself differently on DUP. For sure! I adore that female haiku mistress and wouldn't have dared to steal her name!
Re: Haiku XXIV
4th Sep 2013 7:52pm
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4th Sep 2013 8:24pm
Thank you, dear Poe! Yes, it mates since the pic was first and the haiku the written pendant. At least I hoped it to be :-).
Re: Haiku XXIV
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 9:57pm
A beautiful haiku, Iris. Lovely pic, too. Is this one of your own photos? You've shown the amazing ability of plants to survive in precarious & almost any conditions. Great work! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene

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re: Re: Haiku XXIV
4th Sep 2013 10:14pm
Thank you, Carlene! For liking poem and pic. Yes, it's one of my photos from our tour to the Swiss Alps. I love these precious little flowers :-).
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 10:47pm
Oh, that's wonderful. A great photo capturing the little flowers. No doubt the wind will pick up the 'precious' seeds & transport them elsewhere! :-)

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4th Sep 2013 10:55pm
I only wonder how they're able to cling to pure rock. But they do! Amazing! Nature is amazing.