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Silence
I live in silence -
I dwell in those quiet places
between sight and sound
between dusk and dawn
floating in a dark pool
the milky way blazing above
you may enter my silence
but I cannot let you in
I dwell in those quiet places
between sight and sound
between dusk and dawn
floating in a dark pool
the milky way blazing above
you may enter my silence
but I cannot let you in
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Re: Silence
3rd Sep 2013 9:28pm
It's where peace and harmony live, where you're united with yourself. It's deep in yourself. Not necessary to let someone in, you're never alone within yourself when there's peace.
I think from all your poems I understand this most.
Iris
I think from all your poems I understand this most.
Iris
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re: Re: Silence
3rd Sep 2013 10:51pm
Re: Silence
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Sep 2013 9:32pm
3rd Sep 2013 9:31pm
So thought provoking, tranquil,
and even something sensual about this.
Now, this last line: you may enter my silence
but I cannot let you in
That says to me that they can enter,
but not be fully let into your soul.
Yes, I try to figure out what people
are trying to write, sometimes get it
right, sometimes not, BUT it's still
fun to try;). Enjoyed!
and even something sensual about this.
Now, this last line: you may enter my silence
but I cannot let you in
That says to me that they can enter,
but not be fully let into your soul.
Yes, I try to figure out what people
are trying to write, sometimes get it
right, sometimes not, BUT it's still
fun to try;). Enjoyed!

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re: Re: Silence
The last two lines are ambiguous of course.
I might also suggest that "you" must enter
of your own free will and for reasons of your own.
I might also suggest that "you" must enter
of your own free will and for reasons of your own.
Re: Silence
3rd Sep 2013 11:05pm
we live in the silence
that can't be seen...
(I might have to work
that into something!)
that can't be seen...
(I might have to work
that into something!)
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re: Re: Silence
3rd Sep 2013 11:37pm
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4th Sep 2013 3:58am
Re: Silence
Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 10:57pm
love this write jagracia
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
6th Sep 2013 7:57am
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Re: Silence
Anonymous
11th Apr 2014 6:16pm
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