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ALL'S WELL...
When turmoil rivers
of creativity and unrest
play leaping frog
with my soul
I look for solitude
within my core
to find missing ends
that make it feel
like all’s well
of creativity and unrest
play leaping frog
with my soul
I look for solitude
within my core
to find missing ends
that make it feel
like all’s well
Published 31st Aug 2013
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31st Aug 2013 9:21pm
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 10:01pm
I like the line about the leaping frog, makes it more subtle and gives it a very pure almost innocent feeling, nicely written, Ink!
31st Aug 2013 10:08pm
Powerful write! We all have a few lose ends inside ourselves. It's all in how we tie them back together. :)
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 11:29pm
I think we all, especially as
poets try to find a place
that all is well so to speak.
Very well put:)
Fave line:I look for solitude
within my core
to find missing ends
that make it feel
like all’s well
poets try to find a place
that all is well so to speak.
Very well put:)
Fave line:I look for solitude
within my core
to find missing ends
that make it feel
like all’s well
2nd Sep 2013 10:19pm
1st Sep 2013 4:52am
When beautiful warm images deep inside your core begins to flutter and ascend, all's well
2nd Sep 2013 10:19pm
23rd Sep 2013 8:19pm
brilliant. love the photos. look forward to reading and viewing more of your work. cheers...
23rd Sep 2013 10:29pm
