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Re: I am transient, but
re: Re: I am transient, but
31st Aug 2013 9:00pm
Re: I am transient, but
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 9:04pm
we are the roots
of which beautiful flowers
grow and bloom
of which beautiful flowers
grow and bloom
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re: Re: I am transient, but
31st Aug 2013 11:55pm
that is unless we are moss which don't have roots.
but yes without roots we would be homeless
but yes without roots we would be homeless
Re: I am transient, but
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 10:42pm
Makes you feel you are saying we
are all apart of the earth...just
my take..but never know what you
may be thinking;)
are all apart of the earth...just
my take..but never know what you
may be thinking;)
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re: Re: I am transient, but
31st Aug 2013 11:58pm
It would not be fair of me to write poems
that have only one meaning. Your suggestion
is correct but to be honest, my subconscious
writes half my poems and I'm never sure
what he's thinking.
that have only one meaning. Your suggestion
is correct but to be honest, my subconscious
writes half my poems and I'm never sure
what he's thinking.
Re: I am transient, but
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 11:09pm
...and well too jagracia...enjoyed the little swirl
strider
strider
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re: Re: I am transient, but
...swirl all you wish, add my favorite
Tequila (Partida Anejo) and you've
got something to keep us swirling
until dawn.
Jaime
Tequila (Partida Anejo) and you've
got something to keep us swirling
until dawn.
Jaime
Re: I am transient, but
1st Sep 2013 10:02pm
Deep dartfordian-style poem:) It's interesting to watch how ideas change when passing through different people's minds.
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re: Re: I am transient, but
2nd Sep 2013 5:58am
Yes, and when one's idea leads to another
in another person, if we are fortunate
we get a little synergy.
in another person, if we are fortunate
we get a little synergy.
Re: I am transient, but
2nd Sep 2013 7:14pm
Whales
swallow
plankton
particles
me
to
the
sea.
Like that? Life as a circle of beginningsandendingsandbeginningsandendingsand ...
Like the piece.
swallow
plankton
particles
me
to
the
sea.
Like that? Life as a circle of beginningsandendingsandbeginningsandendingsand ...
Like the piece.
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