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T.L.C.
Sometimes I'm just so damm busy
can't even come up for air
8:00 p.m. just got home
hungry as a bear
looking in the cupboards
empty and bare
open the fridge
nothing there
WTF
life ain't fair.
Look!...over there
on the counter
it's a pear
growing hair
oh death is near
if I dare
shit...I need some tender loving care.
can't even come up for air
8:00 p.m. just got home
hungry as a bear
looking in the cupboards
empty and bare
open the fridge
nothing there
WTF
life ain't fair.
Look!...over there
on the counter
it's a pear
growing hair
oh death is near
if I dare
shit...I need some tender loving care.
Published 30th Aug 2013
| Edited 12th Jun 2023
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30th Aug 2013 7:30am
30th Aug 2013 9:20pm
30th Aug 2013 1:21pm
Oh damn bro! Been there though, especially as a child I recall vividly how much I prayed lunch would come school becuz it was usually the ONLY real food of the day! still have moments in these days in times where things are thin, but ur point is well taken, u need someone to help offset ur lack of food,by adding to ur income to procure some FOOD! hang in there kid...
30th Aug 2013 9:23pm
Added a little spice,not that bad...but I could always use some T.L.C. Had some pizza :)
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
30th Aug 2013 2:36pm
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30th Aug 2013 9:25pm
Anonymous
31st Aug 2013 10:55pm
I can relate my hashman..great write :-)
2nd Sep 2013 8:16pm
3rd Sep 2013 7:07pm
Empty cupboards, empty fridge, but your poem is full of meaning! Like it! No, don't eat the pear ...
Chi
Chi
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