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In Echoes
Make me quiver with your
voice beating in my ears
Your words sooth my desire
wanting your feverish touch
You're in my head when I need
you in my pleasant embrace
Fill me in with your hard act
and follow it with throbbing lust
Gliding into my slippery alley
while I hold on tight with my walls
Saying it over and over into space
than shouting my name in echoes
voice beating in my ears
Your words sooth my desire
wanting your feverish touch
You're in my head when I need
you in my pleasant embrace
Fill me in with your hard act
and follow it with throbbing lust
Gliding into my slippery alley
while I hold on tight with my walls
Saying it over and over into space
than shouting my name in echoes
Published 29th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 10:56am
A tempest write indeed tl.
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strider
29th Aug 2013 12:51pm
Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 11:43am
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29th Aug 2013 12:52pm
Short and hot! Romantic as well. I love these lines:
"You're in my head when I need
you in my pleasant embrace"
However, pleasant doesn't quite describe the feeling, "heavenly" more like :)
Oh and the walls thing, DAMN! ;)
"You're in my head when I need
you in my pleasant embrace"
However, pleasant doesn't quite describe the feeling, "heavenly" more like :)
Oh and the walls thing, DAMN! ;)
29th Aug 2013 4:47pm
29th Aug 2013 6:09pm
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29th Aug 2013 6:42pm
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29th Aug 2013 8:31pm
29th Aug 2013 9:05pm
I would almost echo (no pun intended) Amenicio in that my favourite lines were also most of his.
30th Aug 2013 1:20am
29th Aug 2013 9:38pm
a hot sensual write indeed!! I must agree the wall thing was hot as hell. Thanks tommie
30th Aug 2013 1:20am
1st Sep 2013 9:55am
Echoes..like concentric circles of desire. Growing. Climbing outwards..upwards. Liked what you did with it.
