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The Bird
The tenderness a
characteristic that
trails encompasses you
like electricity rising
in you making me unable
to unspeak to even sing
a song so loud the world
bursts: you close like
a flying bird accepting
rain you know no hate no
indifference: I can count
on it.
characteristic that
trails encompasses you
like electricity rising
in you making me unable
to unspeak to even sing
a song so loud the world
bursts: you close like
a flying bird accepting
rain you know no hate no
indifference: I can count
on it.
Published 28th Aug 2013
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29th Aug 2013 2:01am
Stunning write! As a bird lover I know how truly sweet a bird is:) I would love to know a human being who were as free and gentle as a sweet little bird :)
1st Sep 2013 00:17am
Thank you, nikkimoe. Sad to say, I don't think there are any people "as free and gentle as a sweet little bird." We, as humans, are so complex. Trying to be simple, as "a sweet bird is" may be next to impossible for us. We almost always have an agenda, hidden or not, which, unfortunately, adds to the confusion of who we are. But I'm not telling you something you don't already know. Sincerely, thanks for the gracious comments.
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