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Re: Not a bitch
I'm sure this not a days work or two,but has been preserved carefully for months,but comes out with right temperature.
Essence of your poetry lingers long:).
Essence of your poetry lingers long:).
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re: Re: Not a bitch
Actually, I scarcely edited this one. I hardly ever edit my poems; it's a moment's work but the thought process takes ages.
Thank you, though. It's appreciated :)
Thank you, though. It's appreciated :)
Re: Not a bitch
30th Aug 2013 7:55am
I missed this Ophie
I dunno missus, I like it, it's got your stamp but this is one of those writings that deserves a couple more lines I think.
either way, there is depth here and the title is pretty good (though not sure I agree ;) )
good stuff Ophie
I dunno missus, I like it, it's got your stamp but this is one of those writings that deserves a couple more lines I think.
either way, there is depth here and the title is pretty good (though not sure I agree ;) )
good stuff Ophie
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re: Re: Not a bitch
30th Aug 2013 2:56pm
since it's got my stamp, the few extra lines won't add to anything; if anything, they would spoil the poem.
The title it's just about right, and thank you for not agreeing!
Eamonn, thank you for missing this, it means a lot. Also, thanks for your encouraging words - as usual!
The title it's just about right, and thank you for not agreeing!
Eamonn, thank you for missing this, it means a lot. Also, thanks for your encouraging words - as usual!
Re: Not a bitch
23rd Nov 2013 3:31pm
Re: Not a bitch
23rd Nov 2013 5:41pm
this describes all the varying shades that you are perfectly.. much love Crim
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