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Dama de Noche
Dama de Noche—flower of the night
that’s what you are –
Your fragrance fills the atmosphere:
intoxicating and addictive
I wonder why you bloom only at night!
In an orphanage managed by the nuns
you first saw the light of day,
until you grew up to be such a fine lady,
and got married to an older, rich guy.
Lucky to have everything you could wish for,
except for your sexual needs,
as your husband is bloody cold and impotent!
Young and hot bloodied--
always wanting to fulfill your desires;
One night you became so horny…
dressed as a hooker, you picked-up a guy
to fulfill your desires, your lust to satisfy!
This became a habit of yours
before you knew it, you became a nympho:
Jasmine of the night –
that’s what they call you.
Every single night, different nameless men
are added to your list of faceless lovers;
Not satisfied with one lousy quickie,
sometimes you take six--all of them
with hardened tools until they melt,
and succumb inside your wet and silky stamen--
your insatiable desires, still wanting for more
on a hell of a one night stand…
Your devilish moans set your lovers on fire
only to be drowned with grasps of fresh air
until all the nectars of desires combined,
get sucked up, dripping to the last drop…
Just like the beautiful flower – Dama de Noche,
you close your petals after impregnating the air
with your intoxicating and addicting fragrance,
capturing the earthly desires of your lovers –
slaves to your maniacal world of lust and passion!
(Inspired by a movie with the same title)
that’s what you are –
Your fragrance fills the atmosphere:
intoxicating and addictive
I wonder why you bloom only at night!
In an orphanage managed by the nuns
you first saw the light of day,
until you grew up to be such a fine lady,
and got married to an older, rich guy.
Lucky to have everything you could wish for,
except for your sexual needs,
as your husband is bloody cold and impotent!
Young and hot bloodied--
always wanting to fulfill your desires;
One night you became so horny…
dressed as a hooker, you picked-up a guy
to fulfill your desires, your lust to satisfy!
This became a habit of yours
before you knew it, you became a nympho:
Jasmine of the night –
that’s what they call you.
Every single night, different nameless men
are added to your list of faceless lovers;
Not satisfied with one lousy quickie,
sometimes you take six--all of them
with hardened tools until they melt,
and succumb inside your wet and silky stamen--
your insatiable desires, still wanting for more
on a hell of a one night stand…
Your devilish moans set your lovers on fire
only to be drowned with grasps of fresh air
until all the nectars of desires combined,
get sucked up, dripping to the last drop…
Just like the beautiful flower – Dama de Noche,
you close your petals after impregnating the air
with your intoxicating and addicting fragrance,
capturing the earthly desires of your lovers –
slaves to your maniacal world of lust and passion!
(Inspired by a movie with the same title)
Written by
EngrVV
(D_Poetic Engineer)
Published 26th Aug 2013
| Edited 27th Aug 2013
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26th Aug 2013 5:23pm
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 5:27pm
Interesting write~ the comparison of the intoxicating effects of a flower and sex.
Good luck vv....strider!
Good luck vv....strider!
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
26th Aug 2013 5:37pm
Re: Dama de Noche
26th Aug 2013 6:34pm
I enjoyed it a lot. It was difficult to read all in one piece as I have a 2 yr old but once I got a few minute (yay!) I really enjoyed it ad like Strider commented, I love the comparison of flowers and sex. I feel like I can smell this flower and am intoxicated
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:30pm
I'm glad this piece has this kind of intoxicating effect on you BloodyTears...I'm just happy I was able to convey the message across!
Re: Dama de Noche
26th Aug 2013 7:09pm
captivating. she is a carnal carnation. eagerly we follow her adventures...
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:34pm
Thanks for dropping by JohnF...hope you continue to follow her adventures because with your reception and the others, I think I should do a follow-up poem.
Re: Dama de Noche
26th Aug 2013 8:28pm
I didn't know until I read the first line what the title meant. Recalling the tendency of British soldiers in France in WWI to put their own translations (eg Ypres as 'Wipers') to Belgian or French names, I suspect had such a name been known at the time she might have been (aptly) anglicised as "Dame Nookie"!
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:44pm
Dama de Noche is a type of sweet-scented flower that blooms only at night. It's also Dame or Lady of the Night in its literal translation.
I'm glad I piqued your interest with this piece, Solomon...thank you very much for the read and for your interesting comment.
I'm glad I piqued your interest with this piece, Solomon...thank you very much for the read and for your interesting comment.
Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 00:31am
I have had this flower in my garden in
Puerto Rico love, love, love this piece!
Red
Puerto Rico love, love, love this piece!
Red
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:47pm
Good for you Red...I bet its fragrance fills your room! I'm glad you love this piece.
Thank you so much Red...it's an honor for me to be included in your reading list!
Thank you so much Red...it's an honor for me to be included in your reading list!
Re: Dama de Noche
Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 2:55am
Really well done
Reminds me of "Naked Tango"
where a rich woman married to an older
man....becomes a hooker
Good write
Nice read
Kitty
Reminds me of "Naked Tango"
where a rich woman married to an older
man....becomes a hooker
Good write
Nice read
Kitty
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:49pm
Thank you so much Kitty...coming from a talented poet like you, it means a lot to me!
Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 4:01am
Sad in it's Beauty-makes it truly fragile in Her quest for life-Wonderful Engr.!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
27th Aug 2013 2:53pm
Sometimes people are not contented with what they have...it also goes to show that money can't buy your happiness or love for that matter!
Thank you so much Soul...(hopefully you have tongues of an angel!)
Thank you so much Soul...(hopefully you have tongues of an angel!)
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This 2nd person write splendid! I count you amongst the poets here that can craft a narrative but yet place it within the structure of the poem. (Some people try to do a story poem and it ends up looking more like a novel)
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28th Aug 2013 2:44pm
Thank you very much bro. Jazz...coming from a talented poet like you, it fills my heart with joy!
Re: Dama de Noche
5th Sep 2013 4:24am
Literally speaking,I get allergies with the smell of dama de noche. But the metaphor is just right.
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re: Re: Dama de Noche
5th Sep 2013 8:35am
Some people are allergic to anything even the smell of perfume or a newly-cut grass. Thanks for dropping by Loafer...
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4th Nov 2015 2:57am
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7th Nov 2015 1:53pm
Muchas gracias senorita MsRockyJackson...it's good to hear that you loved reading this piece!