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Trifle Impressions
What I desire
to write about
you I never ever
do because you
sharpen me so
deeply like a
pencil in a sharpener
and always entirely
eternally leave an
indelible impression:
maybe some day I will
even get an idea.
to write about
you I never ever
do because you
sharpen me so
deeply like a
pencil in a sharpener
and always entirely
eternally leave an
indelible impression:
maybe some day I will
even get an idea.
Published 21st Aug 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 00:21am
Nice...you finally stopped using numbers ( I used to number lots of things...it comes with the territory) and your poetic style is starting to loosen up.....
Good work
Kitty
Good work
Kitty
23rd Aug 2013 00:32am
Thank you, Kitty, for your encouragement and suggestions/critique. I find them very practical and useful.
