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On The Other End
I pour everything
onto racing thoughts
making your loneliness
grow with excitement
I can hear your lips
trembling as if they
were skimming across
my sensative skin
Enjoying my reaction
you sink deeper
extending your passion
craving gratification
My thrusting movements
sway slowly covering
your mouth
quenching your thirst
You feel me
On your body
You hear me
In your mind
Sliding over your voice
as your playful words
make my temptation
bust, I smile
hearing you spill
your spunk on the
other end
onto racing thoughts
making your loneliness
grow with excitement
I can hear your lips
trembling as if they
were skimming across
my sensative skin
Enjoying my reaction
you sink deeper
extending your passion
craving gratification
My thrusting movements
sway slowly covering
your mouth
quenching your thirst
You feel me
On your body
You hear me
In your mind
Sliding over your voice
as your playful words
make my temptation
bust, I smile
hearing you spill
your spunk on the
other end
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Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 9:36am
I pour everything
onto racing thoughts
making your loneliness
grow with excitement : Amazing start !!
You feel me
On your body
You hear me
In your mind : Beautiful ultimate lines.
Loved this piece ! Great work :)
onto racing thoughts
making your loneliness
grow with excitement : Amazing start !!
You feel me
On your body
You hear me
In your mind : Beautiful ultimate lines.
Loved this piece ! Great work :)
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 1:14pm
Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 10:28am
Raw emotions are not held in time and space but rather transcend every spindled eradication; why not then send ourselves out along the circuits? The laser cutting bursts of light are no less real than what we see without them.
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 1:14pm
Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 1:34pm
"I can hear your lips
trembling as if they
were skimming across
my sensative skin"
Felt this Tommie. The thoughts of a distant lover can weigh heavy.
trembling as if they
were skimming across
my sensative skin"
Felt this Tommie. The thoughts of a distant lover can weigh heavy.
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 2:20pm
Re: On The Other End
Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 2:11pm
can relate tl....strider
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 2:21pm
Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 5:01pm
An exquisite write. One phrase I am quite curious about, "bust I smile." A reference to the reggae?
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 5:06pm
It should be like this...
bust, I smile
Sorry...:) thanks for reading and catching my mistake.. ;)
bust, I smile
Sorry...:) thanks for reading and catching my mistake.. ;)
Re: On The Other End
Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 6:04pm
Call me anytime ;) One delicious passage got me:
My thrusting movements
sway slowly covering
your mouth
quenching your thirst
My thrusting movements
sway slowly covering
your mouth
quenching your thirst
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 9:20pm
Re: On The Other End
Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 7:35pm
Sexy write, very poetic! I love the climax ;)
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re: Re: On The Other End
19th Aug 2013 9:21pm
Re: On The Other End
Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 9:14pm
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19th Aug 2013 9:22pm