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What do you Know
You know my name
but you do not know me
You know my thoughts
but you do not feel me
You know my words
but they are just symbols
Am I knowable at all?
but you do not know me
You know my thoughts
but you do not feel me
You know my words
but they are just symbols
Am I knowable at all?
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Re: What do you Know
17th Aug 2013 7:06pm
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17th Aug 2013 7:08pm
Re: What do you Know
17th Aug 2013 8:03pm
A philosophical one indeed. Deep and questioning. I like it.
I think nobody ever knows someone else entirely. But sometimes there can be very well a link between two people who don't know each other and they might be able to feel each other anyway, to share their thoughts, ideas, experience. Words can be as well just symbols for those who think they know each other for ages.
Chi
I think nobody ever knows someone else entirely. But sometimes there can be very well a link between two people who don't know each other and they might be able to feel each other anyway, to share their thoughts, ideas, experience. Words can be as well just symbols for those who think they know each other for ages.
Chi
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Re: What do you Know
18th Aug 2013 00:47am
It's hard to know who someone is, but the biggest mystery is who you are.
This ink is a push for deep reflection.
This ink is a push for deep reflection.
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re: Re: What do you Know
18th Aug 2013 5:16am
Yes, exactly. Deep reflection
and exposing the real hidden
behind the facade.
and exposing the real hidden
behind the facade.
Re: What do you Know
I know your name as it is whispered in the wind
touching my heart as it breezes thru me
I know you like the fragrance of a sweet purple rose
knowing it is you that enlightens the senses of my soul
I know the meaning of your sweet words
as they echo thru the night bouncing from the moon to me
touching my heart as it breezes thru me
I know you like the fragrance of a sweet purple rose
knowing it is you that enlightens the senses of my soul
I know the meaning of your sweet words
as they echo thru the night bouncing from the moon to me
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re: Re: What do you Know
Perhaps you do know me.
I feel transparent, stripped
of all pretense by your poetic
response. Like a purple rose
in bloom, I am open.
I feel transparent, stripped
of all pretense by your poetic
response. Like a purple rose
in bloom, I am open.
re: re: Re: What do you Know
18th Aug 2013 5:31am
As your poem is beautiful, your purple open rose is gorgeous and your heart is loving. Xoxo :)
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18th Aug 2013 4:23am
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