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Five Star *

That noise when
it connects
it's like cracking a whip
It makes me
gasp
especially right after
Each point stings
filling me
with numbing tingles
That sensation when
my body
reaches stimulation
I accept his
five star
granting him power
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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