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Knowing
I might
have been
embarrassed
had she not
had that sense
of desire
to understand
my need
for permission.
I rambled on
like a mad man
for some endless time
and finally
asked her
to tell me
the way
to reach out
to her.
She let me know,
allowed me so,
understood so
deeply
my need.
Yes,
was all
I needed
to hear
and with that,
falling some
infinite distance
into her embrace,
my body fell
into
some towering
sense
of release,
and I knew
that she really
understood.
runningturtle87
have been
embarrassed
had she not
had that sense
of desire
to understand
my need
for permission.
I rambled on
like a mad man
for some endless time
and finally
asked her
to tell me
the way
to reach out
to her.
She let me know,
allowed me so,
understood so
deeply
my need.
Yes,
was all
I needed
to hear
and with that,
falling some
infinite distance
into her embrace,
my body fell
into
some towering
sense
of release,
and I knew
that she really
understood.
runningturtle87
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 4:51pm
I like that I finally understand what you mean Sir.
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re: Re: Knowing
15th Aug 2013 5:27pm
I'm working on communicating more clearly.....thank you for your patience.
Re: Knowing
15th Aug 2013 8:40pm
I enjoyed this very much.
fav:
and finally
asked her
to tell me
The Way
to reach out
to her.
That is all we can hope for, is communication from our man. How else can they reach the heart of us.
Beautiful!!
G
fav:
and finally
asked her
to tell me
The Way
to reach out
to her.
That is all we can hope for, is communication from our man. How else can they reach the heart of us.
Beautiful!!
G
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Re: Knowing
Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 1:33am
Lovely erotic poetry
Enjoyed
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16th Aug 2013 2:02am
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16th Aug 2013 11:21am
Favourite verse last, especially phrases "towering sense of release" and "falling some infinite distance" - cue a long fall into her arms.
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16th Aug 2013 3:14pm
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