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'The Rage'
It's that time again,
can't you hear the gasps now?
the night belongs to him
'n with a murderous bent
he's on the prowl...
As he seethingly broods
within the shadows licking his lips
the Dark Rage has returned
once again to deliver death's kiss...
reports of malefic doin's
pour in from all over town
dismembered 'n disemboweled bodies
confirm something evil's going down...
folks lock their doors 'n windows
in hopes to avoid 'n loved ones protect
the night holds an ominous presence
with murder as his dialect...
blood curdling screams
stream thru the night's air
agonizing to the few
who know this angel of death's despair...
for centuries he's roamed
the streets undetected,
claiming hapless victims
without regard or remorse
just a voracious appetite
for murder 'n mayhem inflicted...
so just remember when
all alone 'n things are calm
quiet though it may seem
night is where the Rage roams
throughout the streets hunting
searching for blood, and mayhem
it waits til the moon is full and starless
claiming victims one after the other across the land...
can't you hear the gasps now?
the night belongs to him
'n with a murderous bent
he's on the prowl...
As he seethingly broods
within the shadows licking his lips
the Dark Rage has returned
once again to deliver death's kiss...
reports of malefic doin's
pour in from all over town
dismembered 'n disemboweled bodies
confirm something evil's going down...
folks lock their doors 'n windows
in hopes to avoid 'n loved ones protect
the night holds an ominous presence
with murder as his dialect...
blood curdling screams
stream thru the night's air
agonizing to the few
who know this angel of death's despair...
for centuries he's roamed
the streets undetected,
claiming hapless victims
without regard or remorse
just a voracious appetite
for murder 'n mayhem inflicted...
so just remember when
all alone 'n things are calm
quiet though it may seem
night is where the Rage roams
throughout the streets hunting
searching for blood, and mayhem
it waits til the moon is full and starless
claiming victims one after the other across the land...
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Re: 'The Rage'
Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 3:11pm
Give him my address will you?
Enjoyed the visuals very much babe,
Enjoyed the visuals very much babe,
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:08am
Lmao, okie I will! lol I'm happy u enjoyed my sweetness
n I guess if u didnt know before you know now
I love doing dark scary inks! lol
Appreciate u much sweetheart :)
n I guess if u didnt know before you know now
I love doing dark scary inks! lol
Appreciate u much sweetheart :)
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15th Aug 2013 3:14pm
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16th Aug 2013 1:10am
Re: 'The Rage'
15th Aug 2013 3:45pm
Ekk gahddss!
Scary monsters that prowl the night,
filling us all with terrible fright,
be brave, dare challenge it outright
discover, better to live, in hindsight.
sorry Poe, could not help it lol it was good lol
Red
Scary monsters that prowl the night,
filling us all with terrible fright,
be brave, dare challenge it outright
discover, better to live, in hindsight.
sorry Poe, could not help it lol it was good lol
Red
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:14am
Lmao ur so silly! love the lil freestyle lol thank you n appreciate u always :)
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 4:20pm
Good visuals. It reminds of me of scary movies where death crawls thru the streets like a dark fog claiming victims. Well done Mr. Poetikmind :)
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:17am
There u are! Gosh I've missed u sweetie, didnt realize that name was u but I recognized that beautiful face though! lol
Thank u, glad you liked n appreciate u always :)
Thank u, glad you liked n appreciate u always :)
Re: 'The Rage'
15th Aug 2013 6:24pm
I don't know why I heard Vincent Price voice recite this piece! Made it extra dark! Scary! Xoxo
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:20am
Oh heck yea! That was my homie! lol loved his creepy voice
in MJ's thriller video, n I'm happy you liked this ink
enough to 'channel' him lol
Thank u my sweet Rain!
in MJ's thriller video, n I'm happy you liked this ink
enough to 'channel' him lol
Thank u my sweet Rain!
Re: 'The Rage'
15th Aug 2013 9:25pm
This read when night's is approaching. Scares me! Rage ... rage is dark and all-consuming. Rage hurts and rage kills. That's a real dark one, Poe, and I like it much!
Chi
Chi
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:23am
Well yea the RAGE is all you said, but in this it's juss for scary fun lol I'm happy you liked n I thank u n deeply appreciate you lady :)
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16th Aug 2013 10:45am
Sorry to have misunderstood your intent. Was a really creepy read but had to me a double entendre, too, dear poet.
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16th Aug 2013 10:59am
No apology needed, I understood you completely n agree... Only wanted u to know I wasn't upset about anything is all lol
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16th Aug 2013 12:37pm
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16th Aug 2013 12:47pm
Not upset at all wrong word, I wasn't bothered by ur interpretation is all :)
Re: 'The Rage'
15th Aug 2013 11:23pm
Great visuals painting a dark picture of reality. Nice ink on this. Enjoyed the read.
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16th Aug 2013 1:25am
Thank you, I'm grateful for your thoughts n time spent on my page...I shall be stopping by ur page soon to return the favor :)
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 1:35am
Very well written dark and creepy poem
Enjoyed
Enjoyed
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:55am
As a child my mom used to wait til we went to bed to watch her fav. Thrillers, the wolfman n Dracula, what she didnt know is my bros. n I used to pretend to be asleep n would sit on the stairs in the dark watching n listening to it
N came to live scary movies lol this is one of many
dark inks I did In memory of those movies lol
Thank u ur appreciate u much :)
N came to live scary movies lol this is one of many
dark inks I did In memory of those movies lol
Thank u ur appreciate u much :)
Re: 'The Rage'
Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 1:39am
It's quiet....too quiet. And whatever you do, don't go into the basement or up to the attic.
great stuff of nightmares!
great stuff of nightmares!
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 1:57am
Thank you! N if its quiet I'm not about to go in the attic or basement lol too chicken! lol
Thank you my sweet sexy lil kitten :)
Thank you my sweet sexy lil kitten :)
Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 2:16pm
this was creepy cool..great visuals..enjoyed :)
fav lines:
the night belongs to him
'n with a murderous bent
he's on the prowl...
As he seethingly broods
within the shadows licking his lips
fav lines:
the night belongs to him
'n with a murderous bent
he's on the prowl...
As he seethingly broods
within the shadows licking his lips
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re: Re: 'The Rage'
16th Aug 2013 4:11pm
Aaaaaawwww Lol well I'm honored you liked it so much n truly
deeply appreciate your support always my sweetness :)
deeply appreciate your support always my sweetness :)
Re: 'The Rage'
8th Sep 2013 3:05am
I like this one alot! It was very creepy...It was a really good write and i enjoyed it :)
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Re: 'The Rage'
8th Sep 2013 3:17am
Lol creepy is ur kinda thing I take it? lol
Thank you, appreciate ur support :)
Thank you, appreciate ur support :)