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Renovation
As I ponder on life
poisonous tears are secreted from my eyes
you have infected me with feelings
a soul once full of hatred
where chaos reigned free
Love has forced its way deep into the crevices of my heart
like a rock shattering a window pane
its excruciating
when the walls are slowly broken down
poisonous tears are secreted from my eyes
you have infected me with feelings
a soul once full of hatred
where chaos reigned free
Love has forced its way deep into the crevices of my heart
like a rock shattering a window pane
its excruciating
when the walls are slowly broken down
Published 13th Aug 2013
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13th Aug 2013 8:16pm
Oh how well I know that feeling... My friend it is hateful to discover that you do indeed have a heart. Nice Doc.
Red
Red
14th Aug 2013 2:26pm
Hahaha... Thank you sweet Gypsy. I'm sorry,dont tell anyone about me having a heart please!!
14th Aug 2013 1:20am
14th Aug 2013 2:29pm
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 2:40am
felt it
dr
love
strider
dr
love
strider
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14th Aug 2013 6:52am
I think you were trying to hustle us with your earlier works. You have made huge strides in your writing. Love it!
14th Aug 2013 2:44pm
Thank you Rachel for your kind comment. I had a good tutor that gave me strict instructions when I got here!!! I don’t know about getting better with it, but I enjoy it sweetheart. Again thank you.
14th Aug 2013 11:59am
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 9:08pm
Wonderfully metaphoric description of
heartache. Well written and a good read.
Kitty
heartache. Well written and a good read.
Kitty
16th Aug 2013 4:13pm
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