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Crazy
It was a crazy day
in mid June
I had nothing to say
much less to croon
I sat slumped
against a tree stump
Watching ants go by
carrying a dead bird
by the wings
A crazy day indeed
No focus
Nothing
I didn't even know
If I was all here.
in mid June
I had nothing to say
much less to croon
I sat slumped
against a tree stump
Watching ants go by
carrying a dead bird
by the wings
A crazy day indeed
No focus
Nothing
I didn't even know
If I was all here.
Published 12th Aug 2013
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12th Aug 2013 4:38am
12th Aug 2013 4:47am
:) What things we see-inside and out-Crazy indeed!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
12th Aug 2013 4:51am
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 5:02am
I had that happen to me last week grace!
12th Aug 2013 5:08am
Really? Bad eh? Zoning out sometimes, you know how it is. Thanks for reading Strider.
12th Aug 2013 8:14am
12th Aug 2013 10:21am
Sometimes the mind is a roaring silence and at times an orator. Thanks for reading dear.
12th Aug 2013 1:11pm
12th Aug 2013 1:50pm
No...no eagle, maybe a dove...definitely a dove. Ants are alright. Its the scorpion that are scary. Thanks Terry.
12th Aug 2013 1:25pm
12th Aug 2013 1:51pm
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 4:30pm
You describe that zoned-out feeling well
well scribed
well scribed
13th Aug 2013 1:17am
