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Got lost

In the air I stare
seeking a flare, but...
Nothing there's to say me
"stay".

Written by DanGix

Published 10th Aug 2013

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Re: Got lost

10th Aug 2013 11:23pm

an interesting thought
wrapped up inside a
well worked image...
it's good..

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11th Aug 2013 00:01am

Thank you much, Dartford!

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Re: Got lost

12th Aug 2013 11:17pm

Searching for a reason, given no proof. This is incredibly impactive

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13th Aug 2013 00:03am

Exactly that feeling... Thank you for sensing it.

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Re: Got lost

16th Aug 2013 1:02am

Nice...keep on going :)

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17th Aug 2013 8:21pm

Thank you for stopping by, friend!

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