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Time
It has been said that time heals all wounds
Days turn to weeks, weeks into months
all that’s left is a grieving heart with an empty soul
and an unwillingness to forget a memory from the past
I stand alone
wounds are healed, but the choices and mistakes remain
as a constant reminder
A reminder of the day I let the best part of me go
I pray that time never desensitizes the scar you left
because it makes me a better man
Days turn to weeks, weeks into months
all that’s left is a grieving heart with an empty soul
and an unwillingness to forget a memory from the past
I stand alone
wounds are healed, but the choices and mistakes remain
as a constant reminder
A reminder of the day I let the best part of me go
I pray that time never desensitizes the scar you left
because it makes me a better man
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Re: Time
Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 9:58pm
yep...time dr love
nice write
strider
nice write
strider
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9th Aug 2013 10:12pm
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 11:15pm
Dr. Love....nice to see you back (I missed you or did not see your posts)....good write
and good read...
all the best
Kitty
and good read...
all the best
Kitty
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9th Aug 2013 11:35pm
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12th Aug 2013 5:09pm
Thank you Gabriel for the read and comment. You are to kind, glad you liked it.
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12th Aug 2013 5:14pm
That’s what they say! It’s hard to stay focused and see that light at the end of the tunnel during such a time… Thank you for the read and comment.
Re: Time
10th Aug 2013 5:36am
Hey doc!
"It has been said that time heals all wounds...
...I pray that time never desensitizes the scar you left"
I love how these two lines tie in nicely together. :)
"It has been said that time heals all wounds...
...I pray that time never desensitizes the scar you left"
I love how these two lines tie in nicely together. :)
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12th Aug 2013 5:45pm
Thank you Rachel, it’s always nice to see you, glad it worked. It’s nice for the student to please the teacher!!!
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10th Aug 2013 4:53pm
A great message in this piece DrLove. Lovely to see you back. Wonderful pen.
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12th Aug 2013 5:53pm
Thanks Magdalena. Some lessons we learn the hard way. It’s nice to finally be back. I’ve missed y’all.
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12th Aug 2013 5:08pm
Indeed, wounds may heal yet the devastation some choices create are without end. Striking piece
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12th Aug 2013 5:59pm
Thank you Soulman! It’s easy to make choices, but hard to live with them afterwards. We never think of the consequences at the time. I’m honored you stopped by Ken.