write lines

Right? The lines are even deeper
now that I've written these lines.
Now you've got me thinking...
Good work, mate.

thanks, jag...'life is short but
art is...' (in my case) brief...

Ars Longa Vita Brevis  
 becomes
Vita brevis Ars Breve

I think my poems
are more vox nihil...

this is brilliantly structured to form 2 related thoughts: that the lines are deep, & that they are deeper now than they were...

thanks very much, I think in
part we write the lines upon
our face...and more deeply
as we grow...thanks again

Very well executed. I have read most of what you have here. Very precise. Does what it should, does not waste words. Reveals the quick insight. Very much as Heidegger had conceived of language as a poetic "opening." This is the real essence of poetry. Though I appreciate many of them, there is not a lot to say other than "yes I see" or "well woven" or "quick and clear insight." Mostly I will just hit the button to like the poem because many words at the bottom of a short poem... well it looks kind-of like this.

Thanks for the review. I've always preferred
the short form, I think if minimalist means
anything it means a spark to ignite wider
thought. It's as if a little poem can be the
start of a journey, not the journey itself.
Thanks again :)