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A Tasting
waves on pressed wings beating
as they glide over hill and dale
shimmer of the dense water glistens
while a ship readies to set sail
And I...
carried aloft paused to hear a call of pride
howls it all signals really
echoing effects reverberate flint kissing the pulse
in liken desperation isolation and connection
digging in to patched patterns of parasailing
Where is...
ladders towards the lonely sun
for I shall climb and feast upon
every sizzling drip seared in sigh
to take my breath,take it away
for life...
as they glide over hill and dale
shimmer of the dense water glistens
while a ship readies to set sail
And I...
carried aloft paused to hear a call of pride
howls it all signals really
echoing effects reverberate flint kissing the pulse
in liken desperation isolation and connection
digging in to patched patterns of parasailing
Where is...
ladders towards the lonely sun
for I shall climb and feast upon
every sizzling drip seared in sigh
to take my breath,take it away
for life...
Published 26th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 1:54am
Beautiful soul-write!
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 11:51am
beautiful..such a lonely feel in this..lovely work, soula :-)
26th Jul 2013 4:22pm
OK I will leave jumpin out of chit to courageous nuts like you Soul lol me and heights don't do well lol.
The vivid description of this piece is awesome!
Red
The vivid description of this piece is awesome!
Red
26th Jul 2013 4:24pm
:) Thank You Dear Red very kind:)-Always heights to be found eh? in air on ground---finding them is the fun!!!
26th Jul 2013 10:48pm
i def like the style you've come to find sd. not that i did'nt appreciate your earlier work but after my recent break from reading peer's work up in here i see you have made some titan strides.
well done my friend.
props to you sir....
well done my friend.
props to you sir....
27th Jul 2013 5:34am
I am humbled You say That JR---means a lot to me my Brother--I still write pansy shit as You see too:)
hope I can keep learning...such as music Ya know man...some days it rolls some days it's written in trial and error---Thanks JR!!!
hope I can keep learning...such as music Ya know man...some days it rolls some days it's written in trial and error---Thanks JR!!!
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 10:08am
This poem is like setting off, adrift, the feeling of being weightless, floating....on the edge of a dream. Thanks for sharing, Soul!
27th Jul 2013 5:57pm
27th Jul 2013 6:08pm
Wow. This is beautiful, evoking an ethereal, spiritual mood. well done.
27th Jul 2013 7:12pm
14th Aug 2013 5:26pm
ladders towards the lonely sun
for I shall climb and feast upon
every sizzling drip seared in sigh
Very effective piece, I could feel the longing,
and almost gentle desperation.
A tide, drawing in and dragging back.
Very well written :)
for I shall climb and feast upon
every sizzling drip seared in sigh
Very effective piece, I could feel the longing,
and almost gentle desperation.
A tide, drawing in and dragging back.
Very well written :)
16th Aug 2013 2:15am
I could feel the longing,
and almost gentle desperation.
A tide, drawing in and dragging back.
Thank You--that means a lot Dear Scribbler!!!
and almost gentle desperation.
A tide, drawing in and dragging back.
Thank You--that means a lot Dear Scribbler!!!
