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-whispers
Insatiably
tongues revel behind the lips
as they search for acceptance
soon finding the ear, and neck
mixed with the residual breath
like warm ghostly whispers
inducing bite-lip, eye-roll
Entwined
our bodies writhe in tempo
gliding lusts dew
broken words
a melody of fleeting octaves
all coerced like giggles
from a boisterous tickle
Simultaneously
our desires crest
enveloped by quiver
we erupt in coital bliss
I collapse along side
running fingers through your hair
as you unwind to whispers
of how amazing you felt
(Competition write) Foreplay,Sex,Orgasm
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/5560/
"Write a poem split into three stanzas - foreplay, sex, and orgasm- without using stereotypical 'erotica' words. No fucks, tits, ass, wet, cock, etc I want to see who can manage this using language skills rather than the same old pump-and-dump words."
tongues revel behind the lips
as they search for acceptance
soon finding the ear, and neck
mixed with the residual breath
like warm ghostly whispers
inducing bite-lip, eye-roll
Entwined
our bodies writhe in tempo
gliding lusts dew
broken words
a melody of fleeting octaves
all coerced like giggles
from a boisterous tickle
Simultaneously
our desires crest
enveloped by quiver
we erupt in coital bliss
I collapse along side
running fingers through your hair
as you unwind to whispers
of how amazing you felt
(Competition write) Foreplay,Sex,Orgasm
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/5560/
"Write a poem split into three stanzas - foreplay, sex, and orgasm- without using stereotypical 'erotica' words. No fucks, tits, ass, wet, cock, etc I want to see who can manage this using language skills rather than the same old pump-and-dump words."
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