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His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
It does not matter what I say
or what I wear
how I look
he just wants me
maybe it's the perfume I wear
it can't be anything I've done
I give him no ideas
still he ogles my every move
sends me fuck letters
with tiny drawings of what he wishes could be
god please never let it be
because his hands have never touched me
yet I can feel the repulsive words all over
like its cutting through my flesh
I've cried for myself
for the memories he's brought back
and yet I'm supposed to feel bad
cause he is a client
yes he's a client
but he's also a man
a perverted man
that wants to fuck me
and when he is done
he'd also like to kill me
with just his hands
or what I wear
how I look
he just wants me
maybe it's the perfume I wear
it can't be anything I've done
I give him no ideas
still he ogles my every move
sends me fuck letters
with tiny drawings of what he wishes could be
god please never let it be
because his hands have never touched me
yet I can feel the repulsive words all over
like its cutting through my flesh
I've cried for myself
for the memories he's brought back
and yet I'm supposed to feel bad
cause he is a client
yes he's a client
but he's also a man
a perverted man
that wants to fuck me
and when he is done
he'd also like to kill me
with just his hands
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Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 6:24am
good stuff here Gigi
check 'dose' on the first line, maybe change 'but yet' to and yet
either way, you're poetic evolution is going very well Gigi, fair fkn play to ya
shine on :)
check 'dose' on the first line, maybe change 'but yet' to and yet
either way, you're poetic evolution is going very well Gigi, fair fkn play to ya
shine on :)
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re: Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
Thank you means a lot coming from you xoxo
And thanks for the corrections I fixed it up
And thanks for the corrections I fixed it up
Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
Vile. Really liked this poem. I know how uncomfortable that can feel, for the most part, but working in mental health is an entirely different matter. You never know what the true intentions are, and if you do, they're rarely apologetic for their repulsive nature.
Caliban
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re: Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 7:54am
They really think that it's ok and we must just deal with all their actions. Not true they know right from wrong. Now the severe cases of retardation different story but some if these people have lived normal lives they know and he knows !! Thank you sweetie xoxo
Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 2:05pm
Anticipation, drawn out, can have the effect of satisfied torture....longingly staring into a window where they are displaying what you need. NEED. You have the ability to paint super-realism, Girl.
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23rd Jul 2013 4:02pm
Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 4:17pm
Gg you brought this poem to life so creepy this client is.. I can feel him on my skin reading this.. brilliant beautiful lady.. peace Crim
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re: Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 11:01pm
Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
Yup, have to say, your words are stirring ...
and ... Thought Provoking, but in that sinister, uncomfortable way ....
As per Cal's comment, the mentally unwell, client vibe, ooh, must be uncomfortable ....
Although it was very Hollywood in it's ending, just watched Silver Linings Playbook & in many ways, the film suggests that Bi-Polar, or, basically mental illness can walk with that very fine line of Love/Infatuation .....
Good work G.
and ... Thought Provoking, but in that sinister, uncomfortable way ....
As per Cal's comment, the mentally unwell, client vibe, ooh, must be uncomfortable ....
Although it was very Hollywood in it's ending, just watched Silver Linings Playbook & in many ways, the film suggests that Bi-Polar, or, basically mental illness can walk with that very fine line of Love/Infatuation .....
Good work G.
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re: Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
23rd Jul 2013 11:04pm
Ty big V them movies kill me lol! Although a very mild case is nothing. Some people live with a very mild case and don't even know it! Anyways thank you berry much xoxo
Re: His hands. (Sexual harassment challenge)
25th Jul 2013 4:19pm
very well brought up is true with ppl who arent mentally well. great write
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 4:05am
Very well done here, expressed the feeling perfectly...gave me chills!
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