Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
20th Jul 2013 4:21am
This poem is superb. The simplicity of it, the form, short lines, work well. The image of a river that connects a city as a metaphor for connecting one to another is heartfelt and tender and honest.
20th Jul 2013 5:03pm
As are my thanks! I tend
to think of cities growing
around large waterways,
as we grow around
certain people.
to think of cities growing
around large waterways,
as we grow around
certain people.
