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ripped hole in my under where?
feels like a violation
unwanted water
on the page
engage
in unhaunted banter
a calling
a rape.
because of who i am
its all just something
to write about
but a ripped hole
in my panties
better mean
a demon gets it's wings.
unwanted water
on the page
engage
in unhaunted banter
a calling
a rape.
because of who i am
its all just something
to write about
but a ripped hole
in my panties
better mean
a demon gets it's wings.
Published 19th Jul 2013
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19th Jul 2013 6:11pm
19th Jul 2013 6:35pm
Or there old panties.
I've had old underwear that were coming
apart and I was falling out of.
Good write, Lacey... Pan
I've had old underwear that were coming
apart and I was falling out of.
Good write, Lacey... Pan
19th Jul 2013 7:07pm
but a ripped hole
in my panties
better mean
a demon gets it's wings.
(love that ending)
in my panties
better mean
a demon gets it's wings.
(love that ending)
19th Jul 2013 8:37pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 9:41pm
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19th Jul 2013 10:07pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 10:28pm
A poem with an ironic twist, its also a bit sensual...
20th Jul 2013 1:20am
a devil might get its horns- but a devil getting its wings is quite strong
20th Jul 2013 2:41am
I loved this poem, but the first thing I thought when I saw the ending line (A demon gets its wings) was "Redwings? Period? Wha?"
Buut. That's just my silly mind.
You have a very well-written piece, here.
Buut. That's just my silly mind.
You have a very well-written piece, here.
20th Jul 2013 9:29am
20th Jul 2013 6:43pm
21st Jul 2013 3:03pm
woo....way2go
& thee ending droppt a
little
b'b'b'b'bomb
down
thee soul'hole
of
my
unmentionables
& thee ending droppt a
little
b'b'b'b'bomb
down
thee soul'hole
of
my
unmentionables
