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Threesome~
Ink spills from my pen
dances in between the
the lines freeing my
spirit
with tender thoughts
and simple words
I mark the pages
now worn
what a lovely creative
threesome before
me as everything
criss crosses
dances in between the
the lines freeing my
spirit
with tender thoughts
and simple words
I mark the pages
now worn
what a lovely creative
threesome before
me as everything
criss crosses
Published 19th Jul 2013
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19th Jul 2013 3:57pm
Knowing how super hot you are, I'm betting alot came n will cum hoping to find sensational fire here... Different BUT brilliant!
19th Jul 2013 6:10pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 4:17pm
I really love this piece. You describe so well my feelings of late. Especially with these lines:
"Ink spills from my pen
dances in between the
the lines freeing my
spirit"
"Ink spills from my pen
dances in between the
the lines freeing my
spirit"
19th Jul 2013 6:12pm
Thank you lerdgoin...you have such a beautiful spirit, writing is excellent for you...you were born to write!!Let it out my friend! ;)
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 10:04pm
Thank you Tommie! You too were born to write...you do it so beautifully
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 5:14pm
nice little analogy tl....simple and effective!
strider
strider
19th Jul 2013 6:13pm
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21st Jul 2013 8:55am
A blissful release it is: INK - BLANK PAGES & THE POET'S THOUGHTS ... Quite the 3some
LSP
LSP
21st Jul 2013 3:57pm
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 3:45am
So long porn
So much for porn
No need for porn
Done with porn
So much for porn
No need for porn
Done with porn
12th Sep 2013 5:03am
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 12:11pm
:)
