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Yanar
Shadows didn’t crawl, and they didn’t move against the light.
She knew that.
The physics of the world had always been steadfast. But when finger-like strokes of dark grabbed the seal of her window and reached for her…
Annie Borrows knew she was wrong.
She knew that.
The physics of the world had always been steadfast. But when finger-like strokes of dark grabbed the seal of her window and reached for her…
Annie Borrows knew she was wrong.
Published 16th Jul 2013
| Edited 20th Jul 2013
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16th Jul 2013 9:38pm
Excellent...though I don't know the characters
involved I really like this short stab-of-a-moment
by fear!
myamberdawg
involved I really like this short stab-of-a-moment
by fear!
myamberdawg
16th Jul 2013 10:54pm
Thank you. This was just a piece to catch attention to the whole work. Hopefully the first draft will be finished by fall and the final draft ready for submission by late winter.
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 10:58pm
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17th Jul 2013 00:13am
20th Jul 2013 00:13am
A very intriguing blurb, is Yanar the name of the book? I can see this on amazon and the waterstones website. In the third paragraph it feels like it should be reached instead of reach to make the tense consistent tho, but I'm not completely sober so don't take my word for it. Quick question, what does Annie borrow?
20th Jul 2013 00:19am
Yes, Yanar is the title of the first book. Thank you it was a miss type. What does Annie Borrows? Annie Borrows is one of the main characters.
20th Jul 2013 00:21am
That was a failed attempt at humour....excuse me while I find a shotgun and shoot myself.
20th Jul 2013 00:23am
