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Fool to Love
As I wallow inside my loneliness
Conflicting emotions nagging me (give in to the request)
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Conflicting emotions nagging me(give in to the request)
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Slow down, don't put horse before cart
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If I could embrace a loving heart
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Slow down, don't put horse before cart
Take time to know them before you start
Foolishly in love, is that smart?
It may be foolish to them and you
Not smart, but at least it's true
Come what may, I'll fall into you
Because at least, my loneliness would be through.[/font]
Conflicting emotions nagging me (give in to the request)
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Conflicting emotions nagging me(give in to the request)
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Now, I wonder about the joy it would bring
If I could embrace a loving heart...
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Slow down, don't put horse before cart
[font=Trebuchet MS]
If I could embrace a loving heart
Foolishly in love.., is that smart?
Slow down, don't put horse before cart
Take time to know them before you start
Foolishly in love, is that smart?
It may be foolish to them and you
Not smart, but at least it's true
Come what may, I'll fall into you
Because at least, my loneliness would be through.[/font]
Published 13th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 1:37pm
I think we are all fools in love sometimes...but if you don't take the chance you'll never know...enjoyed your write :) x
13th Jul 2013 2:14pm
Yes I know, I'm very much aware of it... Still it doesn't stop
the thoughts that ring in the head, taunting, laughing
Saying "fool, fool, fool" thanks for that read n support lady :)
the thoughts that ring in the head, taunting, laughing
Saying "fool, fool, fool" thanks for that read n support lady :)
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 2:15pm
"Tis better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all"
Better to be the fool....or you will never experience it....
Finally we are all fools....
Loneliness typo can be fixed
I really enjoyed this poem
Kitty
Better to be the fool....or you will never experience it....
Finally we are all fools....
Loneliness typo can be fixed
I really enjoyed this poem
Kitty
13th Jul 2013 2:41pm
Wow I never saw that lol thanks for letting me know lol n yes but as u know... Knowing n feeling can very much
in conflict lol... Thank u my dear, grateful as always! :)
in conflict lol... Thank u my dear, grateful as always! :)
13th Jul 2013 2:19pm
Honesty and truth win hands down ALWAYS! There nothing dumb about being true to yourself and your feelings,that my friend is courage.
Red
Red
13th Jul 2013 2:44pm
13th Jul 2013 2:21pm
and that there is the nature of love..always seeking..searching...real or not..Love will investigate the possibilities...diggin the rotatin verses bro..very creative indeed..
13th Jul 2013 2:50pm
Yes it will I deed bro! n thanks a ton I'm digging ur
Unending support... Truly grateful for that always :)
Unending support... Truly grateful for that always :)
13th Jul 2013 2:53pm
13th Jul 2013 3:17pm
13th Jul 2013 4:13pm
Ones thoughts should not rule the heart. Thoughts like to play games if you allow them to.
If it is worth it, then take a chance on it I say.
Great write Poetikmind. :)
If it is worth it, then take a chance on it I say.
Great write Poetikmind. :)
15th Jul 2013 1:15pm
Yup I know, like often though one doesn't always
do what one knows right? truly thank u for your thoughts
my dear :)
do what one knows right? truly thank u for your thoughts
my dear :)
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 4:15pm
I think everone has been a fool inlove, thie trick is to learn from being that fool. Lovely write as always
15th Jul 2013 1:21pm
Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 4:01am
A lovely thought - dive in or test the waters, either way, you never know what you might find.
15th Jul 2013 2:07pm
Thank you my petit sexiness ur thoughts n support
are greatly appreciatd. :)
are greatly appreciatd. :)
15th Jul 2013 7:06am
I like the mind engraving way you arranged your heartfelt lines. Love - might be pain. But: No pain no gain.
Chi
Chi
15th Jul 2013 2:12pm
Yea but can't I Just gain weight by eating
at an all day buffet!? lol... Thank u sweetness :)
at an all day buffet!? lol... Thank u sweetness :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 9:47pm
Beautiful! Take time to know someone, so true! Always get to know inside. :)
17th Jul 2013 00:54am
