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She got
I told her that I would love her forever.
And I will.
That I would give her anything.
I should.
She said that she wanted all of me.
Or nothing.
I gave her what she wanted.
I wonder where that selfish bitch is now.
And I will.
That I would give her anything.
I should.
She said that she wanted all of me.
Or nothing.
I gave her what she wanted.
I wonder where that selfish bitch is now.
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Re: She got
11th Jul 2013 7:41pm
She's probably having the same thing done to her at this very moment we can all hope.
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re: Re: She got
11th Jul 2013 9:34pm
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11th Jul 2013 7:41pm
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One should not assume unless they know for sure. Maybe her absence cannot be helped. Me just looking at it from the other side.
Quite the impact in the last line Mr Hawkdude.
Quite the impact in the last line Mr Hawkdude.
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re: Re: She got
11th Jul 2013 9:37pm
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11th Jul 2013 8:52pm
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11th Jul 2013 10:33pm
I'm so not laughing at your past pain, although I'm giggling at how you delivered this!
#SoYOU! Xo
#SoYOU! Xo
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12th Jul 2013 11:16am
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Re: She got
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 00:30am
Strangely, the wording left me wondering if you gave her all of you. Or nothing. I think it was that "I should" rather than "I did".
And if she is a "selfish bitch" for asking for all...
Overanalysing, I know...
And if she is a "selfish bitch" for asking for all...
Overanalysing, I know...

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Re: She got
15th Jul 2013 2:12pm
Sarcasm at it's finest here, miss.
Dude won't commit.
And she has every right to demand all from 'him'.
Dude won't commit.
And she has every right to demand all from 'him'.
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 9:53pm
yikes!..nicely put..potent in it's sting and clever in it's composition..nicely penned :-)

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Re: She got
20th Sep 2013 3:31pm
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 3:23pm
Ka-ching! I feel this..what a stinging sensation and rancid aftertaste these people leave in on the taste buds of our lives..
happiness is the only retribution
well written, lovely work :-)
happiness is the only retribution
well written, lovely work :-)

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