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Jungle Struggle
She is a hot a wild tigress
stalking her prey on the range
a stealthy trek through the brush
the kick in of the adrenaline rush
I must look like a landed dolphin
out of my element on land
my prospects look very dim
for nowhere can I swim
Red is so her color
for this siren tantalizes in red
a transfer of a fury
which restraints will be buried
Ah but mistake maybe more like the spider
that black widow the victim list grows
be advised to get out of the path
for what started as pleasure now incurs all the wrath
In hindsight maybe it it good to know
that in most species the male is larger in size
so while some risk is found in a way
it is more mental in the price to be paid
stalking her prey on the range
a stealthy trek through the brush
the kick in of the adrenaline rush
I must look like a landed dolphin
out of my element on land
my prospects look very dim
for nowhere can I swim
Red is so her color
for this siren tantalizes in red
a transfer of a fury
which restraints will be buried
Ah but mistake maybe more like the spider
that black widow the victim list grows
be advised to get out of the path
for what started as pleasure now incurs all the wrath
In hindsight maybe it it good to know
that in most species the male is larger in size
so while some risk is found in a way
it is more mental in the price to be paid
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Re: Jungle Struggle
Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 5:37pm
that black widow the victim list grows
be advised to get out of the path
for what started pleasure no incurs all the wrath
yes, it sometimes would be nice to be spider-woman.....hmmmmmmmmmmm
enjoyed this poem.........

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10th Jul 2013 6:55pm
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10th Jul 2013 5:44pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 6:16pm
Nice interesting write jazz manor!
strider...
strider...

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10th Jul 2013 6:56pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 10:31pm
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re: Re: Jungle Struggle
11th Jul 2013 2:50pm
Well tiger seemed a better fit for the female and I have always had an affinity for dolphins.
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11th Jul 2013 3:13am
....I have no idea why this ink gave me a mental rush, but it did!
Truly enjoyed this jungle struggle! Xo
Truly enjoyed this jungle struggle! Xo
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re: Re: Jungle Struggle
11th Jul 2013 2:53pm
Maybe because in an intentional manner you are a tigress? Thanks, still have a ways to go to match Ali/Frazier!
Re: Jungle Struggle
12th Jul 2013 4:35am
I'm thinking of this with a double meaning, physically and sexually! Maybe it's just my imagination, but you drive me through it!
Nicely done my friend!!! love it....
Nicely done my friend!!! love it....
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Re: Jungle Struggle
12th Jul 2013 6:30am
Yes the intent was to suggest at least one other meaning! You are right on target!
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 11:31pm
roarrrrrrrrrrr!! Great piece Mr. Jazz!! Enjoyed!!

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17th Jul 2013 5:40pm