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summer of '77
I would wander bare
foot down the kings rd
black jumper blue jeans
otherwise unclothed
looking back, thanks for
avoiding my toes...
Published 8th Jul 2013
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10th Jul 2013 8:27am
i had wanted to say i really loved the ending of this poem. i couldn't completely articulate why, so i thought better of saying it. it just seems a really nice ending to this beautiful little bit of nostalgia.
10th Jul 2013 11:15am
Thanks, Patrick. I do look back
with fondess to my "footloose &
fancy free" days!
with fondess to my "footloose &
fancy free" days!
