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From Him To Me
He clouds up my mind
how did I get here, only
wanting a taboo moment
here and there, only
wanting to watch him
buckle at his knees, that
moment when it hits him,
watching him touch it
than shoot it, knowing I
could do that to him
excites me,makes me feel
so good, I start to bloom
He returns the favor,tells
me how he would suck
on my folds, getting wetter
with every dirty word, he
lights me up, he knows how
to do it, his voice transmits
exactly what I need to
combust
how did I get here, only
wanting a taboo moment
here and there, only
wanting to watch him
buckle at his knees, that
moment when it hits him,
watching him touch it
than shoot it, knowing I
could do that to him
excites me,makes me feel
so good, I start to bloom
He returns the favor,tells
me how he would suck
on my folds, getting wetter
with every dirty word, he
lights me up, he knows how
to do it, his voice transmits
exactly what I need to
combust
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Re: From Him To Me
7th Jul 2013 6:15pm
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7th Jul 2013 6:52pm
Re: From Him To Me
7th Jul 2013 6:21pm
Some people just have that wet pulsating way with words...very sexy Tommie...
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re: Re: From Him To Me
7th Jul 2013 6:53pm
Very very true BZ...slippery slick tongues spitting the right words, thanks for reading!
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7th Jul 2013 6:54pm
Re: From Him To Me
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jul 2013 7:02pm
7th Jul 2013 7:01pm
The perspective you chose for this piece is thrilling...real world. A masturbatorial masterpiece!
I love the recognition in this passage:
"knowing I
could do that to him
excites me,makes me feel
so good, I start to bloom"
I love the recognition in this passage:
"knowing I
could do that to him
excites me,makes me feel
so good, I start to bloom"

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7th Jul 2013 7:18pm
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 10:09pm
I might show up at your door with just a bow on ;)

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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 7:42pm
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 11:05pm
Short sweet write tl
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8th Jul 2013 00:07am
Re: From Him To Me
8th Jul 2013 2:57am
glad your hubby or man or sex slave hahah knocks it out of the park 4 ya....:P
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8th Jul 2013 3:04am