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Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:05pm
Hot hot my dear. You're smoking with this write, I just called the fire brigade, they are on their way, be ready lol.
Great write. :)
Great write. :)
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:09pm
Did singe you dearest? hahahaha thanks Magda, you might have to share your throne, my queen of hot writes hahaha.
Red
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:11pm
re: Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:38pm
Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:47pm
Hahaha! Whew! You did the damn thang, Red!:)
Let me borrow your Pen!
I need to rub it like a genie lamp, wishing for a pen like yours! This page is on fiyah! Xoxo
Sexy Ink....
Let me borrow your Pen!
I need to rub it like a genie lamp, wishing for a pen like yours! This page is on fiyah! Xoxo
Sexy Ink....
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 8:49pm
Nah you rule when it comes to erotica, lol thanks ma you can borrow anything you want lol :-)
Red
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 10:18pm
Very hot metaphors and word manipulations red..
well done!
strider
well done!
strider
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 10:52pm
Thanks Strider! I swear the pen was alive and moving on its own! lolol
Red
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 11:47pm
...so You just like...conjure fire and burn the town down, but that's ok, I So Love those four alarm fires You cast!!!
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
6th Jul 2013 11:52pm
Your sooo silly Soul! Lolol check you eyelashes and eyebrows make sure they're still there and while you're at it maybe the nose hairs too!!! hahahaha luv ya bunches thanks for the support hon. :-)
Red
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
7th Jul 2013 00:01am
re: Re: Poetic Lust
7th Jul 2013 00:14am
Hahaha!Crim you made me spit out my mouth full of water laughing hahaha wild cat? I'll have to ask the next time I have a lover lolol thanks babe you made my day!
Red
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 1:57am
Incredible lusty ink! Super Enjoyed!!
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
7th Jul 2013 2:16am
Re: Poetic Lust
7th Jul 2013 12:20pm
DAAAAAYYYUUMMN I'M GOOD!!! lol to think
I can incinerate n reincarnate you to return n generate
Enough heat to power a planet in which we mere mortals habitate!! lmao... Hhhmmm?? Not what? Oh my bad I thought you said I had that effect on you! lol
~whistles while kicking rocks making a hasty retreat~ lol
4 real this was mega lava lady! :)
I can incinerate n reincarnate you to return n generate
Enough heat to power a planet in which we mere mortals habitate!! lmao... Hhhmmm?? Not what? Oh my bad I thought you said I had that effect on you! lol
~whistles while kicking rocks making a hasty retreat~ lol
4 real this was mega lava lady! :)
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
7th Jul 2013 2:19pm
Can you possibly be more silly?! Lolol yeah baby... it was AaaaLL you, see how you do meeee? Hahaha
But are one,from my harem of male poets, that I love, you guys inspire me greatly! Much luv for ya Poe, thanks!
Red
But are one,from my harem of male poets, that I love, you guys inspire me greatly! Much luv for ya Poe, thanks!
Red
Re: Poetic Lust
Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 1:06pm
Damn....this reads like hot lava trickling down the page burning all within its path....sins taboos...ha...the hell with it..literally and figuratively....exceptional writing Red....
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re: Re: Poetic Lust
Naaj, you seem flustered lolol sit down somewhere get you some water and relax lolol This piece came on like a fever I could not get it on paper fast enough, see that is what happens when the muse feeds my need. ;-p
Thanks!
Red
Thanks!
Red