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Bed
Oh dear sweet bed
I hear you shouting
my name
you want me, on you
my sexy ass on top
of you
I'm coming to give
you what you want
from me
four o'clock in the
morning comes
quickly
and tomorrow I
have a long day
ahead of me
so treat me right
and put me out
til morning
I hear you shouting
my name
you want me, on you
my sexy ass on top
of you
I'm coming to give
you what you want
from me
four o'clock in the
morning comes
quickly
and tomorrow I
have a long day
ahead of me
so treat me right
and put me out
til morning
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6th Jul 2013 5:15am
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6th Jul 2013 10:08am
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 10:09am
I guess it didn't work :) Is that really your bed...seems a little to froo froo ;) Even if you didn't sleep I guarantee that the bed enjoyed having your sexy ass on top ;)
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6th Jul 2013 10:25am
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 11:54am
Well if you think it's beautiful then maybe it's not too froo froo at all ;)
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6th Jul 2013 12:21pm
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 5:54pm
You deserve the best!
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6th Jul 2013 10:20pm
Not her bed, Frank! See her poem 'Reflections from The Ceiling' and the comments - there's something the room in this picture hasn't got.
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6th Jul 2013 12:14pm
Oh that lucky fucking bed!! lol
Love this lady, a bit of sexy mixed with humor
Now that's really sexy! :)
Love this lady, a bit of sexy mixed with humor
Now that's really sexy! :)
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6th Jul 2013 12:20pm
I completely agree ... sexy and funny go very well together!
I was all over that bed last night... ;)
I was all over that bed last night... ;)
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 3:35pm
No snoring there tl...ha ha
strider!
strider!
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6th Jul 2013 6:37pm
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6th Jul 2013 5:49pm
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6th Jul 2013 6:38pm
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6th Jul 2013 7:55pm
If we could ask our beds to make sure we got a good night's sleep (when we need/want sleep) out of them - one day someone may invent such a bed!
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8th Jul 2013 2:59am
I do enough sleeping in my bed...I'd ask for something else!
Thanks for reading SS ;)
Thanks for reading SS ;)
Re: Bed
6th Jul 2013 9:09pm
no offense but one time when my sugar was real low I thought my bed was my lover...hahahahah..
Really loooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Really loooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
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8th Jul 2013 2:59am
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What bed would not want to caress your sweet skin all night, to cover you and wrap you in dreams so that you would never wake to leave the next day. And what what would not miss you if ever you found the bed of another to spend your nights and dreams with. How awful to be an empty bed, as so many hearts who wait for loves and lovers. JJ
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8th Jul 2013 3:01am