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Sexless Sex
So many inches
so many ounces
so many bounces
so much sex
so much clit
so much cock
lick and poke
around the clock.
Once we have
fucked times a million
held up our trophies
and quoting Quintilian
"The perfection
of art is
to conceal art,"
a balloon busting dart
that shatters and scatters
erotica fare,
for only to climax
is going nowhere.
If it were true
tamed straight
by the station,
non-emptiness through
our masturbation,
nothing more further
would bother to be,
closer to you
or closer to me.
The losses
we've suffered
aren't made up
in orgasms
but rather
in closeness
and intimate hours
making all reason
by cuddling showers.
Biochemical spills
of outrageousness
can never fill
an empty old pagelessness.
Memories new
are what I acclaim
will bring down the house
and heal all our shame.
Waiting and baiting
yet pushing right back
too hurt to touch
and too scared to hack.
Where does this leave us
on track number 9
potion or lotion
or doubled up spine?
runningturtle87
so many ounces
so many bounces
so much sex
so much clit
so much cock
lick and poke
around the clock.
Once we have
fucked times a million
held up our trophies
and quoting Quintilian
"The perfection
of art is
to conceal art,"
a balloon busting dart
that shatters and scatters
erotica fare,
for only to climax
is going nowhere.
If it were true
tamed straight
by the station,
non-emptiness through
our masturbation,
nothing more further
would bother to be,
closer to you
or closer to me.
The losses
we've suffered
aren't made up
in orgasms
but rather
in closeness
and intimate hours
making all reason
by cuddling showers.
Biochemical spills
of outrageousness
can never fill
an empty old pagelessness.
Memories new
are what I acclaim
will bring down the house
and heal all our shame.
Waiting and baiting
yet pushing right back
too hurt to touch
and too scared to hack.
Where does this leave us
on track number 9
potion or lotion
or doubled up spine?
runningturtle87
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Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 4:19pm
re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 4:26pm
All true......let's not talk about it, in fact we can skip the fucking and go for a hoagie.
Re: Sexless Sex
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 4:24pm
Sex is not to be counted as the number of times a week a couple should "do it"...but for some couples....they feel "societal" pressure....
Could it be that we are as ambitious to "achieve" even in this area...just a thought...
Could it be that we are as ambitious to "achieve" even in this area...just a thought...
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re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 4:29pm
Hmmmmmmm....well, Kitty.....I am sure there is fuck-pressure.....somewhere.....I know the appearance of it is tremendous.....Even if not doing it at all, there is the need to appear to be doing it at least every once in a while to be keeping up the image of happiness...
Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 4:48pm
A fantastic, clever, fun, creatively written, humorous, wild & wise piece here runningturtle!...
Well balanced & captivating content, concept & wording throughout... I especially like how you wove into the heart of 'it' (all that glorious, explosively ecstatic sex), your emphasis on the most important, lastingly satisfying & meaningful aspect of the whole unifying dance, being equally or more, in the foreplay (touching, holding, kissing, closeness, knowing, trust)& true intimacy!... I agree 100%, but I have to admit here, I still really dig the less intimate thrill at times, of my head & heart exploding all over the place from a really raw, hot, breathless, sweaty, good 'ol primal fuck...(as well)!!!!!...
Great write man!!!... & I enjoyed the read!...
- OIN
Well balanced & captivating content, concept & wording throughout... I especially like how you wove into the heart of 'it' (all that glorious, explosively ecstatic sex), your emphasis on the most important, lastingly satisfying & meaningful aspect of the whole unifying dance, being equally or more, in the foreplay (touching, holding, kissing, closeness, knowing, trust)& true intimacy!... I agree 100%, but I have to admit here, I still really dig the less intimate thrill at times, of my head & heart exploding all over the place from a really raw, hot, breathless, sweaty, good 'ol primal fuck...(as well)!!!!!...
Great write man!!!... & I enjoyed the read!...
- OIN
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re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 4:58pm
Thanks for such a full comment, OIN.....I think there is a slice of this piece that is not as clear as it might be and I am reconsidering an edit for that reason: Mad, passionate writing about sex but then not having any is additively frustrating. So, for all of our talking about how great it is, when there is in fact none, thus the title, the open air discussion of it is mainly hollow, which is not to diminish your own accessed accounting, but rather it is a blind spot, concerning this piece, to those who have even minimal access. I'll edit....
Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 6:10pm
Re: Sexless Sex
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 6:12pm
Very picturesque. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Perhaps this is from experience, or it just came to your mind. Either way, amazing job writing here.
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re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 6:33pm
Re: Sexless Sex
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 6:22pm
We do what we must to release the tensions, physically or mentally. Never ultimately satisfying, and yes, cold comfort most times.
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re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 6:33pm
Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 9:23pm
So many inches
so many ounces
so many bounces
so much sex ...man after my own heart..LOL..leved this poem
so many ounces
so many bounces
so much sex ...man after my own heart..LOL..leved this poem
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re: Re: Sexless Sex
5th Jul 2013 9:58pm
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars/natural.jpg?1367775234
Hmmmmmmm....yeah.
Hmmmmmmm....yeah.
Re: Sexless Sex
6th Jul 2013 00:39am
Re: Sexless Sex
6th Jul 2013 3:04pm
Delving deep into the minds again? Careful there are some strange things in there!
Red
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