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'Aha' Moment
Sea
Breath
Within every second
You fly
I was tied,
My freedom, I beckon.
The sky
Blue
Wide and endless.
Snowy clouds
Beautiful,
Yet I'm restless.
My blood boils
Heated.
You see, I'm angry
with myself.
for living,
life
I've died,
I'm just a shell.
So I ran,
with the breeze,
either
to escape,
or maybe
breathe.
But I'm enchanted,
memorized
By the glittering sea.
No more
will he
Lay his hand on me,
That's
my I decreed.
I leave
my mark,
footsteps in the sand.
Leaving my past
embracing my future.
That's my plan.
So,
my wings,
I fly,
beyond this
magnificent blue!
It hurt,
but for the sake of my life.
I'll get away,
from you.
Breath
Within every second
You fly
I was tied,
My freedom, I beckon.
The sky
Blue
Wide and endless.
Snowy clouds
Beautiful,
Yet I'm restless.
My blood boils
Heated.
You see, I'm angry
with myself.
for living,
life
I've died,
I'm just a shell.
So I ran,
with the breeze,
either
to escape,
or maybe
breathe.
But I'm enchanted,
memorized
By the glittering sea.
No more
will he
Lay his hand on me,
That's
my I decreed.
I leave
my mark,
footsteps in the sand.
Leaving my past
embracing my future.
That's my plan.
So,
my wings,
I fly,
beyond this
magnificent blue!
It hurt,
but for the sake of my life.
I'll get away,
from you.
Published 3rd Jul 2013
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3rd Jul 2013 8:09pm
Wow! Great metaphors here ..,
LOVED ... So I ran,
with the breeze,
either
to escape,
or maybe
breathe.
A joyous message of hope and new found freedom.
LOVED ... So I ran,
with the breeze,
either
to escape,
or maybe
breathe.
A joyous message of hope and new found freedom.
3rd Jul 2013 8:23pm
Thank you Lobo.
I wrote this in inspiration of my friend who just got out of an abusive relationship.
I wrote this in inspiration of my friend who just got out of an abusive relationship.
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 10:23pm
This is a great inspirational poem of
strength..it paints such a refreshing
view of life, of rebirth to a "new"
person...very good job:)
strength..it paints such a refreshing
view of life, of rebirth to a "new"
person...very good job:)
4th Jul 2013 1:18am
6th Jul 2013 2:48am
6th Jul 2013 2:55am
Thank You
but it's not about me.
I wrote this in inspiration of my friend,
who had the courage to walk out on an abusive relationship.
I just really wanted to write some thing about her.
but it's not about me.
I wrote this in inspiration of my friend,
who had the courage to walk out on an abusive relationship.
I just really wanted to write some thing about her.
6th Jul 2013 4:05am
6th Jul 2013 7:36am
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6th Jul 2013 8:10am
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8th Jul 2013 1:43am
Oh wow! Thank you very much ur comment....
I happy to. Know you enjoyed it
I happy to. Know you enjoyed it
7th Jul 2013 3:27am
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