Ashes to Ashes

Too deep! Amazing writing!
I like the emphasis on the inner pain the internal struggle to gain true happiness only in vain. Beautiful!

Thank you I am glad it came across clearly.

Red

Good
Very good :)

Thanks hon,:-)

Red

phenomenal...you convey your emotions so precisely..fluid in thought perfect in execution...it felt like you wrote this in 30 seconds flat...like it just spilled out of you...grand ink indeed Red..goodness!  

It did... Once the emotions took hold it is like opening flood gates, there is no stopping it.Thanks Naajir.


Red

Wow! What an amazing poem! I love the emotion, conveyed so well through selectively chosen words & rhyme. It's great. Well done.

I love the photo you used as well, it really helps add an atmosphere to the poem. Really makes you see the purples & indigo's seep through the words.

Thank you so very much you are very kind I do try to bring forward my best work.

Red

This is deeply felt and overstood Sis....


You have such a beautiful way  with words....
even painfilled ones...



Fire

Thanks my sister you know how we do muahss luv ya!


Red

A serious in-touch write red...I felt a certain peace reading this poem.

strider

Yeah the kind of peace that come when something ends and the healing can begin. Thanks Strider.
 
 
Red

O Dear Red...Deep...hurts to see no matter how eloquent You weave...and truly the Pen bleeds Your Wonderful Heart, stay well and Be strong!!!

You are extremely sweet Soul and I thought I was being subtle lol guess not. I get better everyday but sometimes the old insecurities come a calling.
Thanks for the comment.


Red

emotions drive the true Pen eh?
hehehe subtle--for You...i would imagine so ;)

Ohhh... you know me so well lolol I am about as subtle as a "bull in a China shop"lolol :-)

Yeah; What Abyss, HotNess, Naajir, tplover, Firebyrd, Strider and Soul said!
They took my words! Xoxoxoxo
You're a BAD WOMAN! Love This!!!! :)

Yeah lolol Thanks! d
Ditto and back at ya sweet Rain!

Red

I feel you my friend a poignant time indeed and oh how we allow them to make us feel this way, that is the biggest shame.

This comes across like an affirmation and a beautiful powerful one at that.  Heal my dear Gypsy.

Yes those of us who suffered such things know these feelings intimately, thank you so much Magda, slowly but surely the healing has begun.


Red

Red,

Too deep and incredibly amazing poem. I could feel you ! Great work !!!

Brinda thank you! When I wrote this I did not realize that it would eminate such powerful feelings. Now I am glad it did.


Red

N although you're mired in sufferage n pain
You go on with life  with love the ultimate gain
n if never to be forever you tried
to have known it once, a beautiful visage before
it died... Yea... Feeling you 100 on this my sweet
Gypsy...

Luv ya bunches Poe, this kinda snuck up on me and like so many others, it took on a life of its own.
Thanks for the love.

Red

Eloquent as always dear Red.

Thank you my sweet ethereal Grace. :-)

Red

fantastic words as always, the quest for inner piece never ends.

great work red

marcus

Absolutely I will quest on, thanks Marcus!


Red