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'Sprechgesang'
...She carries confidence
like an anorexic
flesh...
sagging on the bone
she could use
a respite
from all the input,
that soot-caking in her dome
in spite of the 'mist'-
it fit...the ambience of
'tendered garden'
...better home
so the strife ridden
pugilist, a 'rose'
once more,
ignited a light, brighter
than anyone has ever known...
~Sprechgesang
1.
a vocal style intermediate between speech and singing but without exact pitch intonation.~
like an anorexic
flesh...
sagging on the bone
she could use
a respite
from all the input,
that soot-caking in her dome
in spite of the 'mist'-
it fit...the ambience of
'tendered garden'
...better home
so the strife ridden
pugilist, a 'rose'
once more,
ignited a light, brighter
than anyone has ever known...
~Sprechgesang
1.
a vocal style intermediate between speech and singing but without exact pitch intonation.~
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Re: 'Sprechgesang'
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2013 12:38pm
potent and well pointed in it's depiction of the character. Enjoyed the meter too-structured perfectly for spoken word. Great work :-)
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2nd Jul 2013 12:42pm
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2nd Jul 2013 12:47pm
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2nd Jul 2013 1:05pm
Thank you sweetness! Hope it wasn't TOO heavy for u to lift lol ;) appreciate u tons! :)
re: Re: 'Sprechgesang'
2nd Jul 2013 1:41pm
Why thank you kindly sir! from what I read of you, I must say I feel the same about you :)
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2013 2:33pm
Really like these lines:...She carries confidence
like an anorexic
flesh...
sagging on the bone
like an anorexic
flesh...
sagging on the bone
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re: Re: 'Sprechgesang'
2nd Jul 2013 2:36pm
Thank you, I'm happy to know you liked n truly appreciative of ur continued support :)
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2nd Jul 2013 2:40pm
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Re: 'Sprechgesang'
2nd Jul 2013 3:11pm
You know I Google the title before reading this, right? I have to cause you have me feeling dumb sometimes. Anyhoot, quite a WONDERFUL piece, but I expect nothing less from ya! Xo
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2nd Jul 2013 3:14pm
Aaawww baby ur sooo far from being that
BUT I could've sworn I put the meaning below
the poem in case anyone wondered what it meant lol
Still, I adore you my sweet Rain, love how u shower me
so sweetly!!
BUT I could've sworn I put the meaning below
the poem in case anyone wondered what it meant lol
Still, I adore you my sweet Rain, love how u shower me
so sweetly!!
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2nd Jul 2013 10:51pm
I realized that once I read it, but I wasn't going to read something that I knew nothing about! Im a chick that research to gain knowledge. Makes for a better read when I know what Im reading!:))))
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3rd Jul 2013 5:03am
Re: 'Sprechgesang'
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2013 5:36pm
These lines
"so the strife ridden
pugilist, a 'rose'
once more,"
I love how they convey both a rebirth and a return to beauty.
Good stuff, cher.
"so the strife ridden
pugilist, a 'rose'
once more,"
I love how they convey both a rebirth and a return to beauty.
Good stuff, cher.
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re: Re: 'Sprechgesang'
3rd Jul 2013 5:05am
Ur perception is remarkable sweetie, thank u... I'm grateful always for ur support n impressed by ur intellect :)
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2nd Jul 2013 8:31pm
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3rd Jul 2013 5:06am
Re: 'Sprechgesang'
3rd Jul 2013 3:09am
this was totally captivating,luv luv luv this stanza
"in spite of the 'mist'-
it fit...the ambience of
'tendered garden'
...better home"
great wordplay!!! this brought to mind a outcast, a misfit struggling to make the pieces of lifes puzzle fit,then finally realizing it never was suppose to,it was already a masterpiece..just like this ink!!!i really enjoyed
"in spite of the 'mist'-
it fit...the ambience of
'tendered garden'
...better home"
great wordplay!!! this brought to mind a outcast, a misfit struggling to make the pieces of lifes puzzle fit,then finally realizing it never was suppose to,it was already a masterpiece..just like this ink!!!i really enjoyed
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3rd Jul 2013 5:10am
You just gave me the best comment of the day! Wow how awesome is this that u praised me so.... I'm sooooo
happy u enjoyed it! :)
happy u enjoyed it! :)