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Rot In Hell
I love your neck, it would
look better with a noose
around it. Your skin is
gorgeous. I want it
covered in cuts and
blood.
I'll mutilate your cum-
dripping body, you
whore. I'll make it
happen. With a razor
and my burning hatred
I'll wreck your plastic
body.
Oh hey, you left something
here. The knife you left
in my back, you cunt.
I'll teach you to cheat.
Try and cheat again.
Cheat death, that is.
Karma is like the Grim
Reaper. It's serious and
comes to collect. I hope
karma kicks your ass, you
cheating fuck,
You're the worst fucking
mistake I've ever made.
look better with a noose
around it. Your skin is
gorgeous. I want it
covered in cuts and
blood.
I'll mutilate your cum-
dripping body, you
whore. I'll make it
happen. With a razor
and my burning hatred
I'll wreck your plastic
body.
Oh hey, you left something
here. The knife you left
in my back, you cunt.
I'll teach you to cheat.
Try and cheat again.
Cheat death, that is.
Karma is like the Grim
Reaper. It's serious and
comes to collect. I hope
karma kicks your ass, you
cheating fuck,
You're the worst fucking
mistake I've ever made.
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Re: Rot In Hell
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 3:23pm
Damn you can feel the heat coming off that one! I like the word play with cheat and cheat death.
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28th Jun 2013 3:41am
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27th Jun 2013 4:40pm
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28th Jun 2013 3:41am
Cheating is not something I tolerate in a closed relationship. But that's just me XD
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
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28th Jun 2013 00:02am
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29th Jun 2013 11:20pm
Hell yes! I love this poem! I especially love the detailed gore and violence in the poem. I don't tolerate cheating, either. Thank you for writing this wonderful, gorgeous piece.
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30th Jun 2013 2:25am
Haha I try to be as detailed as possible ;)
Thank you, it is a pleasure writing for everyone
Thank you, it is a pleasure writing for everyone
Re: Rot In Hell
12th Jul 2013 10:15pm
LOL,'Try and cheat again.
Cheat death, that is.'
'Your skin is
gorgeous. I want it
covered in cuts and
blood.'
Both f'ing killer.RAW...
Cheat death, that is.'
'Your skin is
gorgeous. I want it
covered in cuts and
blood.'
Both f'ing killer.RAW...
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13th Jul 2013 3:04am