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Bath With Bubbles~
Floating
bubbles everywhere
cover my danger
zone
bath
dancing to great
music swishing
swashing
smoke
from my purple
sneak -a- toke
lingers
box
fan blowing on
me cooling my
hotness
conditioner
in my long thick
dirty blonde
hair
water
dripping down
my tanned
back
tattooed
leg resting on
the rim of the
tub
"mom "
someone's on the
telephone for you
"MOM"
party
over but I soak
until the final
scream
bubbles everywhere
cover my danger
zone
bath
dancing to great
music swishing
swashing
smoke
from my purple
sneak -a- toke
lingers
box
fan blowing on
me cooling my
hotness
conditioner
in my long thick
dirty blonde
hair
water
dripping down
my tanned
back
tattooed
leg resting on
the rim of the
tub
"mom "
someone's on the
telephone for you
"MOM"
party
over but I soak
until the final
scream
Published 27th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 2:11am
A quiet moment seems like to.
strider
strider
27th Jun 2013 2:19am
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27th Jun 2013 2:30am
27th Jun 2013 2:40am
You're relaxing having a little big girl time and than there it is..that word, that voice, like a bolt of lightning fried through you and killed your high...
I thought you would understand D ;)
I thought you would understand D ;)
27th Jun 2013 2:56am
Oh the joys of parenthood! lol
Sorry bout ur bath time/buzz time that would
tick me off lol... Felt the serenity before the
rude awakening
Sorry bout ur bath time/buzz time that would
tick me off lol... Felt the serenity before the
rude awakening
27th Jun 2013 3:15am
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 3:47am
Splish Splash I was take'in a bath long about a Wednesday night rub 'a dub just relaxing in the tub cover'in my dangerous zone ;)
This reminds me of the old "Calgon take me away" ads
Fun Stuff!
This reminds me of the old "Calgon take me away" ads
Fun Stuff!
27th Jun 2013 4:14am
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 4:35am
Enhanced version:
Splish Splash I was take'in a bath long about a Wednesday night rub 'a dub just 'a toke'in in the tub cover'in my dangerous zone ;)
Splish splash I jumped out of the bath
Because one of my young'uns call'in mommy to the phone!
They were 'a scream'in and 'a holler'in knocking and 'a pound'in dude the noise is astound'in HEy Yeah!! ;)
Splish Splash I was take'in a bath long about a Wednesday night rub 'a dub just 'a toke'in in the tub cover'in my dangerous zone ;)
Splish splash I jumped out of the bath
Because one of my young'uns call'in mommy to the phone!
They were 'a scream'in and 'a holler'in knocking and 'a pound'in dude the noise is astound'in HEy Yeah!! ;)
27th Jun 2013 6:42am
Echo Poetikmind and Lerdgoin. First verse stirring introduction to the reader. Could easily picture you through your words.
27th Jun 2013 10:27pm
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 4:29pm
tommie,
Isn't that how it always turns out! Thinking you have some Big Girl time, but Noooooo!!!! ; ) Reminds me of the time I took a bath with bubbles......she sure enjoyed the looking for the lost bar of soap game! LOL!!!
tornado
Isn't that how it always turns out! Thinking you have some Big Girl time, but Noooooo!!!! ; ) Reminds me of the time I took a bath with bubbles......she sure enjoyed the looking for the lost bar of soap game! LOL!!!
tornado
27th Jun 2013 10:29pm
27th Jun 2013 10:17pm
27th Jun 2013 10:32pm
I thought about taking a picture and posting but I figured some tight ass on here would delete it than message me telling me they deleted it because it's porn!So I hope you dream of of! ;))
