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i had dreams
the porn i watch
wasn't a secret anymore
so as you make moans of disgust
i flew away, only to get stuck
in the oversize trees
where a baby bird finds me
and thinks i'm it's mother.
but this
is all wrong.
the porn i watch
wasn't a secret anymore
so as you make moans of disgust
i flew away, only to get stuck
in the oversize trees
where a baby bird finds me
and thinks i'm it's mother.
but this
is all wrong.
Published 24th Jun 2013
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24th Jun 2013 11:51pm
25th Jun 2013 5:01am
25th Jun 2013 12:41pm
th'sweet absurdity of dream world has become so greatly
preferable to the toxic (tho still funny/amusing) absurdity
of 'normal' life of us hum'ans 'being real'...
eye love little dreampooms like this
preferable to the toxic (tho still funny/amusing) absurdity
of 'normal' life of us hum'ans 'being real'...
eye love little dreampooms like this
25th Jun 2013 4:45pm
Lacey, this image is amazing. My only recommendation would be maybe defining what kind of tree it is (pine, oak, etc) though the poem rocks as is. Awesome!
29th Jun 2013 12:55pm
