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Jane Valentine
She kidnapped my mind and poisoned it
with an ocean of her bittersweet lies
hypnotizing me with seductive offers
none of them valuable in my eyes
sexually she was playful, reasonably I was hateful
and with great pleasure I declined
damn right that I'm ungrateful
ashamed I'd be to call her mine
many have been victimized
by her lovely but deadly face
So hard she has fallen
from role model to dirty disgrace
an insult to believers everywhere
an icon of pure, ice, cold betrayal
a dangerous beauty never to be trusted
she'll drive through your heart with nails
with an ocean of her bittersweet lies
hypnotizing me with seductive offers
none of them valuable in my eyes
sexually she was playful, reasonably I was hateful
and with great pleasure I declined
damn right that I'm ungrateful
ashamed I'd be to call her mine
many have been victimized
by her lovely but deadly face
So hard she has fallen
from role model to dirty disgrace
an insult to believers everywhere
an icon of pure, ice, cold betrayal
a dangerous beauty never to be trusted
she'll drive through your heart with nails
Published 22nd Nov 2010
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2012 5:22pm
GlennMcCrary,
Really had a good time with the read up until the last line. It just didn't drive it home for me. Kind of like getting to the finsih line and stumbling. Enjoyed.
tornado
Really had a good time with the read up until the last line. It just didn't drive it home for me. Kind of like getting to the finsih line and stumbling. Enjoyed.
tornado
