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Concious and Subconcious
Your thoughts stir and stir
In infinite and delicate circles
Your thoughts slowly drill
Into mine,booming demands
If only i had more free will
I could become the one who commands
my subconscious,myself,my other identity
I hate you, I love you
In a way you were my remedy
To renew the lost and the old
That Demander,that commander
with an endless lists of shouts
chattering throughout my brain
My heart, their heart,full of disdain
Invented by each other
Thriving in our own Chaos
In infinite and delicate circles
Your thoughts slowly drill
Into mine,booming demands
If only i had more free will
I could become the one who commands
my subconscious,myself,my other identity
I hate you, I love you
In a way you were my remedy
To renew the lost and the old
That Demander,that commander
with an endless lists of shouts
chattering throughout my brain
My heart, their heart,full of disdain
Invented by each other
Thriving in our own Chaos
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