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Sudden
Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assassin ... who does it for fun.
Two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
a life snuffed gone away in broad day light... I'm done.
Two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows, leaving only one
The horrific world I know disappears... just at the setting of the sun.
like an assassin ... who does it for fun.
Two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
a life snuffed gone away in broad day light... I'm done.
Two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows, leaving only one
The horrific world I know disappears... just at the setting of the sun.
Published 21st Jun 2013
| Edited 10th Apr 2015
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21st Jun 2013 12:56pm
nice
little
self-epitath kinda thing ////
keep riting the rite-on, write on&on & don't
go getting yrself blinded/blindsided
by either darkness nor The Light
little
self-epitath kinda thing ////
keep riting the rite-on, write on&on & don't
go getting yrself blinded/blindsided
by either darkness nor The Light
21st Jun 2013 6:25pm
Thank You very much.
And also I will definitly take your advice... :-)
And also I will definitly take your advice... :-)
Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 6:15am
(In the next to last line, not sure if you meant to, the i should be capitalized unless that's how you meant it but to me personally it throws off the letter growth because I'm is capital)
But I loved this, it's raw and from an urban place mixing reality and beauty in the imagery it flows with each line, right to the finish. Very good!
But I loved this, it's raw and from an urban place mixing reality and beauty in the imagery it flows with each line, right to the finish. Very good!
29th Jun 2013 2:24am
