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a wee taste
then that lemon on that tree
the one you pointed out was smiling in the breeze
the taste of it
once devoured
the shell spat out
up
into the sharpening air
frozen
the one you pointed out was smiling in the breeze
the taste of it
once devoured
the shell spat out
up
into the sharpening air
frozen
Published 17th Nov 2010
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17th Nov 2010 9:39pm
19th Nov 2010 5:04pm
i don't think this is a load of shite... i don't understand how you can say that ?
its written quite well, and i can relate to it.
perhaps you don't quite understand poetry ?
who cares. i love it Graham
its written quite well, and i can relate to it.
perhaps you don't quite understand poetry ?
who cares. i love it Graham
16th Feb 2012 9:23pm
