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No one else
I would take millions of pictures
And cover my wall
Just photos of you
No one else at all
Because no one else shines
Or smiles the way you do
I've never seen beauty
That matches you
I wont let you down
Ill swallow my pride
I won't go too far
If your not by my side
Ill be brutally honest
I don't care what people say
I love you so much
And I'm here to stay
And cover my wall
Just photos of you
No one else at all
Because no one else shines
Or smiles the way you do
I've never seen beauty
That matches you
I wont let you down
Ill swallow my pride
I won't go too far
If your not by my side
Ill be brutally honest
I don't care what people say
I love you so much
And I'm here to stay
Published 17th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 12:23pm
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17th Jun 2013 12:35pm
Thank you very much amanecio
Yea they are my favourite lines as well I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Yea they are my favourite lines as well I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 7:53am
Firstly, welcome to the DU. Hope you have a great time here.
The sentiment in this is lovely, and in terms of an easy, enjoyable read, this hits the spot.
Just fixing a few spelling, grammar and punctuation issues:
I would take millions of pictures
and cover my wall,
just photos of you
no one else at all
because no one else shines
or smiles the way you do,
I've never seen beauty
that matches you
I won't let you down
I'll swallow my pride,
I won't go too far
If you're not by my side
Il'l be brutally honest
I don't care what people say,
I love you so much
and I'm here to stay
Thank you for the read.
The sentiment in this is lovely, and in terms of an easy, enjoyable read, this hits the spot.
Just fixing a few spelling, grammar and punctuation issues:
I would take millions of pictures
and cover my wall,
just photos of you
no one else at all
because no one else shines
or smiles the way you do,
I've never seen beauty
that matches you
I won't let you down
I'll swallow my pride,
I won't go too far
If you're not by my side
Il'l be brutally honest
I don't care what people say,
I love you so much
and I'm here to stay
Thank you for the read.
